TimmyJake

Timmy here As requested, I have joined the party. Oh, wait. Did you request or did I offer? I believe it was the latter. I have always loved your writing, ...

Timmy here This was an amazing chapter, and I just love, love the fact that there were none of the other characters in it to help make Falyn's decisions, and ...

Timmy here Oh dear. Dabbling in killing off characters, and then not fully doing the job. Oh, it's okay! Akia is only mostly dead, which is a lot better than ...

Timmy here So, like Livvy, I am no expert at poetry so my review will be kind of simplistic, but hopefully helpful in some way. Here we go. Hopefully I ...

Timmy here Let's just head right into this piece, shall we? Ready? Psssh, course you are. We have you out numbered. It’s pointless for you to fight it.” nitpick number ...

Timmy here! There isn't much for me to say on reviewing this piece, but I thought I would sneak a peek. :) Iggy has gotten pretty much all the nitpicks ...

Timmy here Lets just get right into this and see what I can find! He watched Niro’s eyes slowly lose their life as his face went pale. If Rhys held ...

Timmy here So this will be a short review because there isn't much to say. Everyone here has said so much, and there isn't much to say to begin with, ...

Timmy here I am heeeeere, and finally caught up. I am sorry I didn't get to your chapters straight away. I didn't see them. Anywho, here I am now - ...

Timmy here So I will just go through with a few technical things because there isn't much to nitpick in this as far as plot and everything goes. You're doing ...

Timmy here Oh. At first I thought this was the opening chapter of the book you were talking to me about, and I was like, Whaaa? It didn't look right ...

Timmy here So this chapter is, perhaps, the shortest of all your chapters in this novel - or I should say, this part of the chapter, because you write fairly ...

Timmy here! So I do notice quite a few things in this story that are different from the previous editions. Yay! Now if only we could get past the first ...

Timmy here! Happy Review Day. Someone wasn't honest with me when she said there were no other works I haven't reviewed...

Timmy here for a short review! Happy review day. Let's get going. :) The idea of having a poem about a smile is so simple, and yet so profound. Smiles ...