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Re: The Open Window
Timmy here This will be a short review because there isn't much to be said, I think. Not much critique I can add to what your reviewers below have already ...
Nov 2, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds Chapter 23 - Part 2
Timmy here I think I will just stick with the normal format for this chapter. Will be easier to find something to talk about, I think. Always the most difficult ...
Nov 2, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 23 Part 1
Timmy here This review is going to be short as there isn't much I can say, I think. Your reviewers have done an excellent job grabbing everything I may have ...
Nov 2, 2014 -
Re: Untitled: Prologue
Timmy here I don't know how much time I have to write this review, but here's hoping I can get it finished in the few minutes I have left on ...
Nov 1, 2014 -
Re: Suicide Note
Timmy here This seems to be a poem engineered to spark some thought and deep meditation on what it means. And, to me, I think that is a good thing. ...
Nov 1, 2014 -
Re: A Dreamer's Struggle
Timmy here I am sorry, Grace, if my review is written in a somewhat naïve fashion. While I can write some songs, I don't know much about songs at all. ...
Nov 1, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 22 Part 2
Timmy here This part of the chapter seems to have a focus, and that focus is very centered on Falyn and her guilt. It's funny how she still feels she ...
Nov 1, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 22 Part 1
Timmy here Instead of giving you a fifteen thousand character introduction to my review, just because it looks "kewl", I think I will just get started. Whadya think? Let's jam. ...
Nov 1, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 21
Timmy here I love Rhys *coughs* Well, as a villain, anyway. He is just the perfect evil guy, because he isn't the perfect evil guy... if you get my meaning. ...
Nov 1, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 20 Part 3
Timmy here! This will be a short review because I am tired, and I don't know what to say because everyone has already covered so much of what I would ...
Nov 1, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 20 Part 2
Timmy here! Ooooooooh, another dream. You're starting to use quite a few flashbacks now, giving us little slivers of their previous life chapter after chapter, filling us in. I like ...
Oct 31, 2014 -
Re: Broken Pencils are Pointless 4.2
Timmy here This will be a short review because there isn't much to say here, I think. The chapter is pretty perfect as it stands. Let see what I can ...
Oct 31, 2014 -
Re: Free Write Friday
Timmy here I write these reviews not because I think they will help your writing or your literary side of things, but because I think you may like just reading ...
Oct 31, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 20 Part 1
Timmy here Of course, the idea that Akia and Rhy were once friends was something you engineered to shock us. At least, that sure seems the intent. And it creates ...
Oct 30, 2014 -
Re: Taste the Sorrow ( this chapter is now referred to as CH 2 ) *Revised*
Timmy here I admit I am just a tad confused here.
Oct 30, 2014