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Re: Random, Possibly Cliched, but then Again, Possibly Original, High Fantasy Epic Prologue (with the pointless love poem since removed)
Timmy here You have already had eight excellent reviews on this piece, so I will keep this short and to the point. Mainly I am just here because in order ...
Nov 28, 2014 -
Re: Chasing Dragons - Laurel
Timmy here I have a few minutes to spare before having to toddle off, so I will try to give you as good of a review as I can. Since ...
Nov 27, 2014 -
Re: As Messed Up As It Gets - Chapter Two
Timmy here Forgive me for being late. I was snoring in the other room. >.< It was such a blissful time, sleeping away with nothing but my lovely music to ...
Nov 27, 2014 -
Re: The Lost Psalm
Timmy here! This reminds me that I need to write some poetry. >.< I think I am going to review this without keeping any ties to the actual psalms in ...
Nov 26, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 28 Part 2
Timmy here! First off, let me apologize for not getting to this sooner. I have been lazy with reviewing the past few days, and I hope that does not become ...
Nov 26, 2014 -
Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 35.
Timmy here How dare you. >.< I read through this chapter, thinking it is all one big prank of her brother or something, and then you throw that curve-ball at ...
Nov 25, 2014 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 35
Timmy here! So one thing I am noticing the farther we go along in these chapters is the amount of dialogue goes up with each one. Sometimes, we have a ...
Nov 24, 2014 -
Re: As Messed Up As It Gets - Chapter One
Timmy here! I think in this review I will try to focus on what could be added, and not as much on what could be taken away. I think your ...
Nov 23, 2014 -
Re: The Confirming--Part One
Timmy here! Oooooh, a story about confirmation class. This is going to be fun and exciting to read, as well as being something I can relate to with you. For ...
Nov 21, 2014 -
Re: The Siren's Song
Timmy here So, because this is a first draft and you asked for everything and anything, I am going to look at this piece and pull out just that. Technical, ...
Nov 21, 2014 -
Re: Crushes Can Crush You
Timmy here I am here to review this piece only because you asked me to. If I had it my way, I would just leave a comment and skedaddle - ...
Nov 21, 2014 -
Re: Ironclaw Chapter 1: Tale of the Coyote and Escaping the Cage
Timmy here! Now this is what I am talking about. I loved this piece so much. I admit that when I read the prologue, I wasn't sure. Oh, I loved ...
Nov 21, 2014 -
Re: Ironclaw (Book 1): Characters and Prologue
Timmy here! So I said I would come by and review this piece for you, because I did the last bits of your book you had posted, but neglected to ...
Nov 21, 2014 -
Re: Karuit's misson
Timmy here! So you asked me to review this yesterday, and I didn't know where it was. But then I searched for your piece, and here it is! So here ...
Nov 21, 2014 -
Re: Frozen Hope Chapter 3
Timmy here! So before I head into this piece, let me just tell you that I have not read the previous chapters at all, so my review may be just ...
Nov 21, 2014