TimmyJake

Timmy here I lost my hat in the Ueathe Mountains, in Therol. Forgive me for the delay. >.< I can't review without my hat. You and your fantasy. It's a ...

Timmy here :3 (Well, looky there. Two of me will have reviewed this once I am done. O.0 Normally, I would read and skip over it if I had already ...

Timmy here :3 Oooooh, so this is the moment we've been waiting for. And the moment that Asenath has been watching and preparing for. Looking back at the first chapter, ...

Timmy here :3 I can safely say this chapter turned out to be exactly not what I expected. Especially with that guy, old whatshisface, and the conversation with him. OH ...

Timmy here You're so mean. >.< Now you have me thinking that Falyn is going to die, which, may I add, is a horribly wicked idea. And if she doesn't ...

Timmy here. :3 I like how you're continuing to bring her horrid experiences to her, in her dreams (especially there!), when she is thinking, no matter what. I think it's ...

Timmy here Firstly, welcome to YWS. This is a great place to post your works and get feedback on them. I hope you stick around. :3 Onto the piece. When ...

Timmy here So I have read through this piece once, and so far I sense only few bits of awkward phrasing and such which can easily be fixed in your ...

Timmy here This is a short chapter, so I will stick around for not quite as much time... or until I run out of things to say. Your chapters are ...

Timmy here Because of the great reviews you have received already, this will be a short review. Not much to say after all those great people came before me. But ...

Timmy here If this review sticks merely to the facts and doesn't explore your story or characters at all, it is because I am reviewing this piece alone, and haven't ...

Timmy here So you wrote this in a P.M? That does make it more difficult to review, since you didn't actually write it as an essay. Since you wrote it ...

Timmy here I am reviewing this solely on what you have in front of me, since I have no knowledge of the circumstances and murders you talk about. But murders ...

Timmy here. :3 Yes, I am going to attempt the impossible - as usual. I am going to try and leave you a review that actually helps you out, and ...

Timmy here So they're getting to pull down the dagger, eh? This should be interesting. How they come up with ways of doing it without alarming the dude with the ...