TimelessMage

By all means, your interpretation to what I have written is the closest to the intent that I had! Your critiques were things that were things that I wanted to ...

Sorry this one took so long! I had a ton of IRL stuff going on, so I had to put the project on temporary hold. I am not sure how ...

I'm basing this off of Scottish folklore (the very little Wikipedia is telling me anyways), so when Matheson is speaking ill of the Slaugh, he isn't cursing elves per-se, but ...

Hey there! Unlike many of my other works, this one is simply meant to be a descriptive piece, so there isn't going to be a second part (though I am ...

Thanks for the review and advice! To be honest, as I add more, I constantly go back to review and change what has already been written, so when you say ...

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Im pretty sure the quotes for your "Fireworks of emotion" are from a different poem, one that I did not wirte, lol. Thanks for the review!

I have taken the many (and by many I mean three) people's suggestion to make the 3-line stanzas rhyme. @RavenAkuma, I really appreciated the feedback on making the 2-line stanzas ...

This is great! The repetition of stanzas made this a really enjoyable read. I didn't understand why you repeated the stanzas until I thought about Ouroboros. The stanza "the serpent ...

This is a great descriptive piece. The only thing bad about it is the choppiness of the sentences. Overall, it's pretty good for variety of language, and the words you ...

What does LP stand for?

Never realized this was about the antagonist, lol.

I always find that stories can have more than one meaning; even ones that an author doesn't necessarily intend to mean. Don't be afraid to draw meaning from things, that's ...