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Re: // windowsills and snowflakes
Oh once you mentioned the rabbits I stopped thinking of the addressed person as a human and maybe some kinda animal. Dogs do love to dig and I would hazard ...
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Re: Sever the head and the body dies
Must admit I wanted to skip this for now but then I read the summary. And checked the title again. And read the summary again and… uhm let’s just say ...
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Re: Bliss
And to you too a warm welcome. I work in the trenches of the Green Room so I’ll be looking at your story today =D Or maybe your… poem? First ...
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Re: They Don't Stay Dead
Hi and welcome to the Green Room. Saw you post this today and decided to check it out 😉 Nice flag in your avatar btw :3 [First thought it was ...
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Re: Clockwheel Cities - Chapter 1: It All Starts in Paris
So I came back from walking the dog, checked the Green Room, saw all the poems that still need to be reviewed, cried a little and then decided to read ...
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Re: Holding Ruin and Roses
Must say I already love the imagery in your summary. Stitching sanctuaray out of what hurt you and using pain as a way to structure life/the stitch work? That’s really ...
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Re: Tristan’s story-Siren’s Desire
Alright this is abt Lorelei’s left behind brother. Let’s go! Ok first thing I notice is that your second sentence stretches over 4 lines and that is …that is way ...
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Re: Katherine’s “super fun sleepover!”
Oh this has me think of my first sleepover too. I heard about it from classmates and was like: I want in on that action :3 So first of all, ...
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Re: Desdemona’s death
Well call me surprised, I checked the folder for all the stories I missed and there is only this one xd Let’s go. Desdemona sounds very reasonable when she says ...
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Re: The Portrait of Ruth
Regarding your summary, I think there is no objective way to judge poems so whatever you wrote, it’s probably gonna be all good xd Now, let’s do read it ^^ ...
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Re: Chapter 3- The Heartz Chronicles
Onto Ch3 immediately 😉 Ah and aren’t “Then I awakened. I woke with a start” just the same thing? Feels like if you leave out the first sentence you have ...
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Re: Chapter 2- The Heartz Chronicles
Alrighty on to chapter 2. Oh I rly like that her mom takes care of her and gives her plushies :3 Can relate to the doing nothing for 30 min ...
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Re: I Wish I Was Somebody Else
Just a small tip, maybe you want to structure your folders a bit more? :3 Onto the poem =D I really like this line here: “out of these blind sighted ...
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Re: The Heartz Chronicles- Chapter 1
Ah why is this not in the Green Room? I was wondering where this story went @.@ Figured I read something of yours that’s not a poem first before I ...
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Re: Dirty Body
Ok first of all I think this topic is very sensitive and I approve of your summary. That this is what victims need to hear. That it’s not their fault ...
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