Tikaya

Thank you for sharing this poem! I find these lines particularly powerful: don’t ask me to call this my homeland. Home is the place where I can be myself. I ...

Alright, I am here for more adorable sibling action before things go wrong! Aww I enjoyed the descriptions in this one a lot. I also really like that it’s just ...

Alrighty, first review of December, here we go! I like the idea of exploring the monster in the closet :3 Hmm in the other story, we also had the mother ...

Annnd my final review for today. My hand hurts =D I really love these confusing statements in your poem. Like cutting off wings is what enables flying? Or that someone ...

I’m a bit intimidated by the length of your work. Here’s hoping I can do it justice :3 Ah I LOVE the transcript dialogue. Oh I am so so intrigued ...

Alright, I hope you’re okay! I really like the visceral feel of your poem. The way you use alignment really draws the eye along. Also that there are different reasons ...

Let’s get another poem out of the Green Room. Hello again 😊 I really like that you continue to write abt animals. Makes me happy. Also the way you compare ...

Hi Messenger, I have come for another of your poems 😊 Petrichor, the smell right before or after rain… I really like how the lyrical narrator motivates themselves from “no ...

Next chapter! Oh you can feel the class divide between the MCs and those pretty people who surround them. I really like how you describe the entire thing with the ...

Hello! I’m starting with Ch6 today as that’s the first of yours still in the Green Room 😊 While I find the first paragraph perfectly adequate, I feel like you ...

I wanted to mention that I really like the idea of a school for hybrids/monsters. Forgot to say that in the last chapters. From what I see in this, I ...

Alright now Valencia’s POV I feel like this story could have been run through a spell checker before posting. There are quite a few spaces etc missing ☹ [Also, dialogue ...

Aww again I like that the parents are so involved with their kid. Also I like how Jenny is so unfazed by all the creepy stuff going on bc it’s ...

Hmm first up: Hello! I’m here to review your story that has been left in the Green Room for a while. My first thought is that your paragraphing is very ...

Hmmm I’m surprised that Salem’s mind has deteriorated this much. You talk abt him being guilty abt eating mice and in the next breath here he is, toying with a ...