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Re: DEER EYES chapter 1
Well well well, good morning to you! You have summoned me and I have come! Hmmm I didn’t know windows can be lanky… *blinks* Okay and it’s getting even more ...
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Re: most beautiful thing
Good morning! I was intrigued by your summary, it feels very poetic! I really like the flow of your work. It feels like it sits in the middle of poetry ...
May 28 -
Re: Sisyphus: Your Wrongs Haunt Me
You know canopy, everytime I go through my spreadsheet of the Green Room, I get stuck on this intriguing title of your poem. And I was always hoping someone who ...
May 28 -
Re: PETALS OF MY HEART
Good morning! I’m curious about a poem with a reading time longer than 2 min, so let’s see what you have in store ^^ I already like how the first ...
May 28 -
Re: Through fire and vengeance 1
Good morning! I have finally come for your story; it’s been in the Green Room for long enough ^^ My first thought is that maybe you could have run this ...
May 28 -
Re: My Black is Beautiful
Hi Dove, I know you said you’ve left the site, but I still wanted to take a look at your poem :hug: I like how you have the bold sentence ...
May 28 -
Re: The Means to Travel: A U.S. History Screenplay Assignment (Scene's 17-18)
Hi Tao! Here for the final section, finally =D Something’s wrong with the grammar in this sentence: “The waves connecting our worlds is already frayed” But I also don’t know ...
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Re: Anastasia’s origin: Witch’s wonder, Hell’s hate
Okay, one more thing about Anna~ And already we can see that Anna is a special child by going like “yup, these wild rats, time to make some friends” :3 ...
May 27 -
Re: Witch’s Wonder, Hell’s Hate: Part Ten
Ohhh the final story. Let’s do this!! Wanted to give a shout out to the italics that REALLY work for me: “He’s helping his dearest wife try to kill me.” ...
May 27 -
Re: Witch’s Wonder, Hell’s Hate: Part Nine
Good morning! I decided to do some catch up with this story line. It is one of my favourites of yours ;3 Already happy that the hand is mentioned =D ...
May 27 -
Re: Centaur Stage CHP 3 {Sanders Sides Fanfiction}
Well then, it’s been a while! “to make sure that the other centaurs, mostly Janus, weren’t panicking.” The other centaurs aren’t allowed in the house? It’s been 2 chapters since ...
May 26 -
Re: Shadow (Chapter 1: Party Time?)
An ordinary week you say, and yet there’s been nothing but tuna sandwiches? XD I wouldn’t call that normal! I feel like you could be doing a bit more to ...
May 26 -
Re: don't light a wet cigarette - chapter 1
Well Nori, the long-awaited follow up to that a bit surreal prologue :3 Ohh I like how you describe the lamps as navigator stars! “Is this how fireflies experience the ...
May 26 -
Re: Late Night
Considering I read the snippet and I liked the charas, let me look at the start of this story too XD Ah it feels like you could use a bit ...
May 26 -
Re: You're A Weapon
Goooooood morning, fellow dice enthusiast!! I am no good with poetry, so let me take a look at your prose instead~ I really like the way you portray the direness ...
May 26
