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Re: Stained Rose: Chapter 2
Hia, decided to come back to this one in my efforts to clear out the Green Room 😊 Hope you’re doing well! I like that she’s thinking abt the incident ...
Jun 26 -
Re: A freudian analysis on Oyasumi Punpun
Hah, I do appreciate the music rec but I generally don’t have music on when creating or reading^^ But I love the idea! Hmmm I feel like your essay has ...
Jun 25 -
Re: Wisdom vs Majority: Plato and Modern Democracy
Hia, must say essays are also not my strong suit but I feel like putting on my thinking cap today :3 Although I’m gonna start with a grammar tip: do ...
Jun 25 -
Re: Daisy sneaks off to the local library
Good afternoon! Short story time :) I feel like the Green Room is getting emptier and emptier which is super motivating for me to read more! I like the name ...
Jun 25 -
Re: curator
Hia! Beautiful profile picture! Poetry is usually not my strong suit but I did want to check out what type of things you are writing :) Hmm I wonder if ...
Jun 25 -
Re: The Prince of Apes
Hia and welcome to YWS. I hope you come back and settle in, write some reviews of your own and engage with the community 😊 For now, let me read ...
Jun 25 -
Re: Shadow (Chapter 5: Werewolf Time)
Werewolf time! Let’s goooo! Now you just have to spend the effort to prettify the links and you’d ascend! I like the description of the abandoned building! I don’t understand ...
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Re: Ilna - Chapter 2
Good evening. Let’s head straight into Ch2 This is kinda a redundant sentence, no? “ all the more since, on a warmer day, they would have been light and dry“ ...
Jun 25 -
Re: 🖤🎀 Janice makes a human friend (part three) (last part) 🎀🖤
Okay I take that back, given how short this is, I think having it at the end of the last part would have worked way, way better ^^° I mean, ...
Jun 24 -
Re: 🖤🎀 Janice makes a human friend (part two) 🎀🖤
Forgot to mention it last chapter but this was an excellent stopping point! Oh myyyy ahhh just imagine poor Endora in the box, first hearing the knife against the wall ...
Jun 24 -
Re: 🖤🎀 Janice makes a human friend (part one) 🎀🖤
Well then! As instructed, I have come for more Janice~ I like the red and black colour scheme for the title :3 Hmmm I feel like it might not be ...
Jun 24 -
Re: kids are funny, aren’t they?
Good morning! Saw chi reading this and now I am here too :3 And I didn’t know this was related to Janice!! “They make up either stories from their imagination ...
Jun 23 -
Re: Ilna - Chapter 1
An excellent morning to you! Let’s see what your first chapter brings, shall we? :3 And if that first paragraph isn’t a hook to suck you right in? (I peeked ...
Jun 22 -
Re: I hate my friend
And one more. I haven’t done much poetry lately =D Ohh I like the contrast of the rather positive attributes mentioned in the first 4 lines that then turns into ...
Jun 21 -
Re: Sam and Lazari converse
Oh you might want to put the scene that is immediately before this somewhere at the start of this piece? I feel like you’re dropping me right in somewhere without ...
Jun 21
