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Re: Ava Luxrose’s story-Zombies of Mariesville
I don't know why but when I read about a magic girl with pink hair, I immediately thought of Elfenlied @.@ I remember that the inevitibilty of the Elfenlied girls ...
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Re: ******
Hi hello, nice to meet someone new in the Green Room =D I'm not in the habit of reading Author's Note, I don't like spoilers but maybe it's the formatting, ...
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Re: “Entry despair”
Oh wow, I haven't watched the series but I still feel like this poem captured the essence of it, or at least of something horrific. I really like the way ...
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Re: the distance was never enough
I love the formatting of the story (and also the font). Some observations: we were stupid, then. greedy. The period here feels deliberate and adds emphasis! rag doll through endless ...
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Re: Alanna helps Caden [Part Three]
Okay had to read this too before I pause reviewing for now. Also that answers the question of what Alanna intents to do when she shows up at Adonis' place. ...
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Re: Niko, you kind young girl 🌸✨
I like that this poem feels ... very gentle. From word choice and also from the flow. It feels like Niko tried so hard but failed someone or something in ...
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Re: Claudia helps Caden and Alanna pass on
Ah this belongs to the ghost girl story who floated over the ocean, right? To get revenge. I wonder what it means that their victims find freedom. What victims? In ...
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Re: 🎶🎀 Celia and Delia’s parents 🎀🎶
Oh that is such a sad and revealing line: For it felt too high without them around I really like that image! Again I like that you show the parents' ...
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Re: When Laughing Jack met Jason the toymaker [Part Two]
Okay there is a German saying, "Was nicht ist, kann ja noch werden." meaning that something that hasn't happened yet, might happen eventually. Reminds me that my other review was ...
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Re: When Laughing Jack met Jason the toymaker [Part One]
After the Laughing Jack story ystday, I'm looking forward to see this guy NOT eat children nor candy :) First of all, I really thought this would be about Jason ...
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Re: The walk to school!
Complete tangent, but I always find it strange that people are looking for an older and a younger twin. Do the few minutes in birth time really matter? @.@ Also ...
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Re: Tyler’s origin: The Laurence family’s deepest woes
Woah that story had a super fast pace. Lots of concepts, from nearly friendless Tyler having only Eleanor and then sudden reveal that he's a demon and Eleanor having 0 ...
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Re: A Father’s Day like no other!
While at first I wasn't really sure about the story, because the beginning had so many repetitions, that last line of the introduction has me HOOKED! Oh no, to get ...
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Re: Joy and Sorrow from Tomorrow [Ch. XIII, Nine] - Part I
Oh I really like the way you write these diary entries. It feels very immersive and engaging! At least for the first three paragraphes :) Also the casual way the ...
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Re: The killing of the cat
Oh I remember I read a story about Alyssa already. She's the influencer, right? Ah... There probably is a very specific crowd who is just eagerly waiting for someone to ...
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