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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 5} Chapter 10
While I have to admit that the tournament challenges sound super fun and I would have loved to see how Jarid assigns his squad to them and see them succeed, ...
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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 5} Chapter 9
Ohh I heard so much about Shadow and now we have a tangible proof of him here. And he got taken in Jarid’s absence!! It makes me wonder what kind ...
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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 5} Chapter 8
Okay, next chapter, here goes :) Thanks for the bg info in your comments! I really like the way the queen says this: “Therefore, whoever did this is both a ...
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Re: The death of Benjamin Cochran
Okay, had to check out one more of these to figure out more of what's going on. Quick thing, this here doesn't really flow well: Daddy said that they were ...
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Re: Servitude
Ohh I remember I read something of yours about these characters before! I find it.... a little disturbing how easily that woman agreed to let 2 children in to let ...
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Re: Sally makes a decision
Hmmm I really like the idea of Sally having nothing to fear from LJ but keenly aware that others are not that lucky. I'm a bit sad that she's been ...
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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 5} Chapter 7
I like the idea of using different languages like a secret code. I’m still trying to figure out what it means to be a Dragonthro since humans and dragons alike ...
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Re: Preparation Day
Interesting that like all versions of Christianity, they make such a huge difference between men and women. Men get to be elders while women can only be sisters. I really ...
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Re: Anita and Jennifer make a run for it
Another movie I wish I'd have watched. Here goes! I really like the beginning and how Anita clings to her friend. Like the description! I'm a bit confused... Is Jennifer ...
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Re: Carrie’s run
I always wanted to watch that movie and never got around to it... I really like that you took it upon yourself to give Carrie a better ending. She had ...
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Re: It appears that the parents have arrived
Alright here goes. The story I’ve been dreading. Poor Corbin is meeting the creepy pastas. And hoo boy do they make an entrance. Love the descriptions here. I feel like, ...
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Re: Lucien’s walk through the graveyard
Already I’m feeling for the MC here. Survivor’s guilt is no joke. Also that he thinks about that she doesn’t belong on a cemetery… Ahhh :( :( Oooh that is ...
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Re: Worst part of Quintilis
I really love the rhythm of your poem. Also the beginning draws on in immediately with the “I loved a lie”. I also like the image of raindrops writing memories ...
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Re: Finn’s story-Siren’s Desire
Okay, I do have vague memories of these characters. Looking forward to learning more about them! Okkk he was kept locked up for the cold months Literally locked up? I ...
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Re: As Perdita digs a deep hole
I know this has nothing to do with the story but I can’t help but have the lyrics for Devil on my Shoulder by Billy Talent on my mind. ~I ...
Nov 24, 2025
