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Re: Awakening Book 2 Chapter 2: Messy
Alright yet another story from an author I haven’t encountered before. Howdy! I skimmed the previous few chapters to understand what’s going on (I’m improving!) I really like how you ...
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Re: The Fall - Chapter 10
So Sange didn’t see Ben. Or maybe there is a time difference between their POVs. Only one way to find out! I rly like the description of the forest at ...
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Re: The Fall - Chapters 8-9
Kinda sad that there are no reviews for this chapter. The last one was super dramatic and now I wonder if I might never get to know the end of ...
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Re: The Fall - Chapters 5-7
Not sure if you’re still around to get those reviews but I shall do my best anyway! Can’t agree more with Ben here: “What could possibly be so scary about ...
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Re: 25 classy Christmas tales (Tales 1-6) (Part One)
I think I finally figured out how to sort the Green Room correctly. And this might actually be the oldest 1 Review Story in the Green Room. So. Here I ...
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Re: ⚔️🏰 Prince Cesare Albrecht: Paranormal showgirl 🏰⚔️
Ok time to check out the prince’s story. From all I have read so far, he’s the character with the least… presence. At least to me. So let’s see what ...
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Re: Witch’s Wonder, Hell’s Hate: Part Eight
Alright, I checked and you avoided using speech tags so, I give this part a try. I like that you continue this story, I think it’s one of my favorite ...
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Re: “Being different is cool, right?” [Part Two]
Alright next part, after realizing that her friends might have been kidnapped by Josephine all these yrs ago. Just a quick overview since I’m actually running out of energy (Happiness ...
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Re: “Being different is cool, right?” (Continued)
Ah I guess this is where the comment under the last chapter becomes relevant? Because now Stefanie has done something worthy of praise but no one will ever know and ...
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Re: “Being different is cool, right?”
Hmm I feel like maybe you didn’t need the pinned comment. If you do it right, it becomes quite obvious through your writing. I’m a big supporter of letting the ...
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Re: Fabrications: Even Y'kara
Hello! Let me get right into the review! One thing I learnt is that passive sentences can break the immersion. Especially if your very first sentence is one. Maybe something ...
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Re: Hestia and Dracon’s origin: Souls and roses 🌷🪱
Okay last one for today. This is about the parents of Moon and Tuer? Interesting that they are so passive while their children are so passionate! And that when the ...
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Re: ✨🥀💎💀🌹 Our souls won’t die alone (continued) ✨🥀💎💀🌹
I’m kinda surprised this has 0 reviews. Here, let me change that. I skimmed the first part so I am READY. Also I already have a good handle on Tuer ...
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Re: At the pizzeria
MWAHAHAHHA FINALLY! FINALLY a fandom I KNOW stuff about. I’m so happy. Also I’m happy that Ravena reviewed this so it showed up in my usual stomping ground of “1 ...
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Re: Sage-Alice and the aliens
Alrighty, and I have reached the most recent one. Feels nice to go in order :3 So this is abt Sage, the other defector. I really like that you explain ...
Nov 26, 2025
