Tikaya

Hello! I’m starting with Ch6 today as that’s the first of yours still in the Green Room 😊 While I find the first paragraph perfectly adequate, I feel like you ...

I wanted to mention that I really like the idea of a school for hybrids/monsters. Forgot to say that in the last chapters. From what I see in this, I ...

Alright now Valencia’s POV I feel like this story could have been run through a spell checker before posting. There are quite a few spaces etc missing ☹ [Also, dialogue ...

Aww again I like that the parents are so involved with their kid. Also I like how Jenny is so unfazed by all the creepy stuff going on bc it’s ...

Hmm first up: Hello! I’m here to review your story that has been left in the Green Room for a while. My first thought is that your paragraphing is very ...

Hmmm I’m surprised that Salem’s mind has deteriorated this much. You talk abt him being guilty abt eating mice and in the next breath here he is, toying with a ...

Alright, a new folder. Let’s get started. I already like Salem. His name’s nice and I like this motivation. Please at least consider looking into proper dialogue formatting. I don’t ...

Hi hello, you get another one from me today =D You might want to take a second look at your summary and fix the typo there 😉 I find your ...

Hi hello! Here for a review for your story ;3 Some grammar tips: “, it was all corn,” this sentence is in the middle of another one so you don’t ...

Hello there 😊 Like the line about the vixen being like a flame. It’s a nice imagine and it can also be seen literally since vixens do have the orange ...

So many poems still left in the Green Room. Alright, onward! My first thought about the mouth full of apples and metal was actually abt how this might be about ...

Another poem, another chance to improve at reviewing them 😊 Oh I like the strange emphasis that line creates: “she is, a doll she is” Hm it feels like between ...

Found another one I can initiate into the sacred forms of proper dialogue formatting =D “Now, you know I only let kids that are over 10 years old or over ...

Nothing’s better than a little reviewing in the morning ~ I think it’s saying something that I don’t know if the first 2 lines are an A/N or part of ...

My first thought is that these are a lot of knitting references. [I have friends who knit. They can talk endlessly abt it!] I really like that you spread out ...