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Hey, writervid! I love this so much! I'ts amazing it doesn't have more likes and comments and reviews! I only have a small nitpick and I'm not sure it can ...

Hey, Amnesia! This is really sad. But, it speaks to me and probably a lot of others, too. I really like this. It's not often a poem or any other ...

Hi, myjaspercat! This poem was really really excellent! I truly loved it! And, although I like to write poetry, I normally don't like reading it. This was wonderful and I ...

Hey, EverWinter! Okay! So! I really like this poem. The description is wonderful! But, I do (unfortunately) have a few nitpicks. Alright, so, first off, I thought there was a ...

Hey, chhlovebooks! This is very beautifully written and I really like it! I only have a few small nitpicks with it. I'm not going to point out anywhere specifically because ...

Hi!! So I feel like the message here is quite beautiful but the actual way you're portraying it is pretty vague. Little Mistakes I caught: 1.) Did you mean not ...

Hey!! So, hi, a few things before I start praising this. :/ First, poems should normally have a rhyme scheme and the fact this doesn't threw me off. In some ...

Hi! I feel like this is beautifully rhymed! I really like the tone and rhythm of this poem. Although I would've expected a jumpscare of an ending. XD Anyway, this ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS! This is an awesome piece to be able to say you have written! I love how the first line is about poems in general but then ...

Hey! This is really funny! The only thing is that the rhyme scheme is there in some places but not in others. I also really like the "puns" you added ...

Hey! This poem is relaxing (as others had mentioned) and it flows quite nicely. The first paragraph is really good, in my opinion, because it leaves you with a question ...

Hey! So, I am going to review this as I go through and will write down any notes or questions or anything of that sort as I go along. Okay? ...

Hey! Here to review! So, I really like the prompt you choose to use, first off. (I'm reviewing as I read, so, sorry, if it isn't in order. I'll just ...

Wow! When I was reading this, I realized, this is exactly how my Mother is. Well, how I see her to affect my life. I could never even try to ...

Hi! So, I really like the concept conveyed here! But, remember, spellcheck can be useful and maybe read over it as if you were the reader to check for little ...