Thisislegacy

Legacy here for a review. I notice in your author's note that you weren't trying to impress anyone, but I do think that you could definitely build on this by ...

Legacy here for a short review for a short poem. I like the structure of this poem and how it is so short. I think there should be a comma ...

Legacy here for a review :). Personally time only heals things to an extent, it also matters on the other things that you do to try to be better (from ...

Legacy here for a review :). Okay so the first thing I noticed was the word bifurcate. I had to look the definition up and it means to split into ...

Hey Legacy here for a review. I do like the imagery you have here although it is very vague. I wish it wasn't as vague but it could be what ...

Legacy here for a review. I thought these friends were real people until the last bit when you said that you would pick up a book and step inside. This ...

Legacy here for a review. I love the content, I really relate to it. It's very direct and there isn't very much imagery. But there doesn't need to be any ...

Legacy here for a review. I love the format of this poem, short lines and four lines per stanza. Like this poem is short and sweet, although I do wish ...

Legacy here for a review. Just a nitpick before I get started. You don't have any stanza breaks and it makes your poem seem longer than it actually is. It ...

Legacy here for a review. This sounds very amusing and sort of like the song "game over" by Falling in Reverse or some songs written by Hollywood Undead. I would ...

Legacy here for a review. You have a nice simple rhyming scheme without having the rhymes feel forced. You also have a nice story and imagery. Many people can relate ...

Legacy here for a review. I will keep my own religious beliefs out of this review because you did not ask for them. (you may pm me if you wish ...

Legacy here for a review. It was very hard to understand what you were writing about and what you were trying to say. Most short stories are in prose, and ...

Legacy here for a review. Your title was catchy and overall I thought this was very funny. Your formatting is off. Dialogue is supposed to be centered and you also ...

Legacy here for a review. Sorry for the nitpick but "mr kookaburra" should be "Mr. Kookaburra". Now onward to the rest of the review. The way you have it formatted ...