Thisislegacy

Legacy here for a review. I would love to do a review on content but like your other poem, your formatting is to the point where I can't understand the ...

Legacy here for a review. This poem was very hard to read because the lines blurred together. I wasn't even able to finish reading it (maybe after editing you could ...

Legacy here for a review. I do not play instruments so I cannot comment on how your cords work together (although others have already) but I can comment on your ...

Legacy here for a review. I like this poem but it was very hard for me to read. As I was reading, the words started to blur together. The forced ...

Legacy here for a review. I love how this is written, I was singing it in my head while I was reading it. (The dashes are supposed to be where ...

Legacy here for a review. I like how you left the poem in all lowercase (usually it annoys me very much) because of the fact the narrator seems to be ...

Legacy here for a review. I love the rhyming scheme you set up here; it sounds sing songy which actually works with the content as well. The story you told ...

Legacy here for a review. I love the imagery you use here along with personification (correct me if I am wrong but it seems like you are describing a doll ...

Legacy here for a review. "People breath icy breaths." should be "People breathe icy breaths." because of grammar. "they die from a death". I don't understand this line. It's pretty ...

Legacy here for a review. I like this poem a lot. I can see the imagery (well used). I don't like the first line though, it seems off (you did ...

Legacy here for a review. I like the idea of having blanks were certain letters should be, but some of the words were hard to understand because of that. I ...

Legacy here for a review. "For I know that is not my name, so go ahead, give me your worst." I would rewrite that as "I know they are not ...

Legacy here for a review. I love the imagery you use in this piece. I can clearly see a small child saying the stuttering words in the beginning. But then ...

Legacy here for a review. The title of this essay works well because you are trying to make the point that your curiousity of medical science is like a wildfire ...

Legacy here for a review. I love this poem. The content is there and the imagery is there. Your stanza use is great. I love how you put "but do ...