Legacy here for a review.
I love how this is written, I was singing it in my head while I was reading it. (The dashes are supposed to be where a note is held right?)
I could see the scene even though you left it so vague. The basic content is of someone leaving their hometown either to somewhere else or dying of suicide (since there is a choice assumed by how the questions are asked.)
This seems to be a chorus of a song, I don't see how it could stand alone. But if you were to add more imagery and more to the story in this lyrical form, I can see this being played on an alternative station of sorts. Legacy out.
Points: 402
Reviews: 145
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