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Thanks! I wrote this when I was falling for a guy that I had no chance with whatsoever. So I'm glad you all like it. And I was writing it ...

Thanks clueless. I really need the tips if anything sounds too plain. And I love that song! Casting Crowns never get old.

Hey, okay well I wrote this about a year ago and I really don't know what rhythm and beat it can go to. So if you have any suggestions on ...

Thanks guys! I actually got my inspiration from the Kingdom Hearts video game. :) You know the part when Sora is talking in the beginning about his memories. It just ...

hey everybody! i just posted this so please read it and critique. I can't get any better if you don't tell me what i'm doing wrong. so please help. thanks!

thanks, i'll work on it.

hey, guys! just to let you know "gay" is not as in lesbian. it means happy. just saying so you wont get confused:)

Thanks for the critique, Snoink. I really need to improve on my poetry. But i will go over the poem and try to fit in some more details. Thanks again!

thanks, i wrote this the other night out of thin air. and no it isn't from personal experiences, so thanks for all the comments. :p

thanks! i just really appreciate the critiques. it helps a lot and i like to see how other people view it.

Hey everybody! This is my first story so please critique, and don't hold back!

this one was really- i don't know what to say, i just can't think of a word to describe this, except that it is a good piece of poetry. keep ...

Hey, guys. I really don't know if this one will be as good as the last one, but I hope that I can keep up with you all! I wrote ...

WOW! :) I cannot believe you thought my poetry was good. :shock: You my good sir, are a natural. I really don't know what to say, except for that it ...

Thnks! :D I really don't know how I got my feelings down on paper. Thnks for the criticism is really helps! I hope to also post a story that I ...