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Re: Eunoia - Poem
Hello Piyali! This is Ebony here, trying to get back into reviewing. So, firstly I love the whole aesthetic of this piece! It's so pretty, and Eunoia is such a ...
Mon Dec 21, 2020 11:58 am -
Re: The Dark Sea
Hi kiandre, I'm Ebony. I'm practicing getting back into reviewing so here it goes. I love the use of repetition in this poem, especially the repetitions of the pronouns. The ...
Fri Dec 18, 2020 6:37 pm -
Re: Dry Tears
Okay, time to catch up to the werewolves. Hi Flumaddidle. Your resident poetry novice is back to get some more reviews done. I'm not sure whether this is meant to ...
Sun Oct 29, 2017 8:47 pm -
Re: Three Words For You
Hi there Flumadiddle! Happy review day! Again! So, I found this piece really beautiful and meaningful. It's clear you put a lot of thought into the language you chose to ...
Sun Oct 29, 2017 4:12 pm -
Re: Me
Hello there! Happy review day! I'm a poetry novice looking to improve her skill by reading and reviewing other pieces of work. I think the others who have reviewed this ...
Sun Oct 29, 2017 3:42 pm -
Re: Thank You
Hi there! Happy review day! I'm a poetry novice looking to improve my skills by reading and reviewing other writer's work. My advice won't be the best, but hopefully it's ...
Sun Oct 29, 2017 3:11 pm -
Re: Dear Orion
Hi there. Happy review day! First thoughts: Oh my god this is beautiful. Second, more calm and collected thoughts: This was such an emotive piece. I just happened to come ...
Sun Oct 29, 2017 2:34 pm -
Re: Hazel
Hello! Ebony here for a quick review. I'm sure people have already said this but the first sentence is a bit too long. Here's an example of how you could ...
Sun Oct 29, 2017 1:48 pm -
Re: connotation
Hello there and Happy Review day! I'm a poetry novice who's looking to improve her skill by reading and reviewing other people's writing. I thought the imagery in this was ...
Sun Oct 29, 2017 1:31 pm -
Re: Word Vomit
Hello! I'm an inexperienced poet so whatever I say in this review is probably complete and utter nonsense, but I hope some of it is vaguely helpful. First thing: Loved ...
Sun Oct 29, 2017 1:20 pm -
Re: Two Steps Forward One Step Back (Prologue)
Hello again! After reviewing the first chapter, I've come to have a look at this. So, from what I can tell, this is a self help guide aimed at adults ...
Sun Oct 29, 2017 9:58 am -
Re: Two Steps Forward One Step Back (Chapter 1)
Hello and Happy Review day! I'm not sure exactly what this is, but I really related to it. (Is it a non-fiction book? A story?) I haven't read the prologue ...
Sun Oct 29, 2017 9:26 am -
Re: I'm really good at endings (pt 3/end)
First thoughts: OMG this is amazing!!! Second, more reasonable thoughts: Hi Sound. I know I've already told you how much I liked this piece, but I thought I'd give you ...
Wed Oct 25, 2017 11:05 am -
Re: Tern, Tern, Tern
First thoughts: Wow. That was not what I was expecting at all. Second, more logical thoughts: The imagery was so beautiful and striking, especially "kissing the edge of a cloud". ...
Thu Oct 19, 2017 7:12 pm -
Re: Trumps Wall
Hello Mr Trump. I'm not too good at reviewing poetry, so if I say something wrong please feel free to correct me. First of all I think this is a ...
Wed Sep 27, 2017 8:30 pm
