TheUnnatural

Hahaha I was literally laughing when I was reading this C: Great poem! These are the poems I would love to read as I'm just getting out of bed for ...

Really nice poem, you're a natural writer :) I like how you broke the poem down into different parts, and the numbers (that kinda made it into chapters almost) was ...

Wow really well written! So many emotions and so many feelings :') I love how you never write something specifically in your writing, but kind of leave of vaguely, leaving ...

Hello, Unnatural here! Nice story. I liked how you chose a different way to present your work. It was fresh :) I'll warn you that I'm kind of a harsh ...

Very nice, simple poem :) I found it kind of sad how the poem was rambling on about how cute and cuddly it was and how you were so close ...

Splendid and right to the point. I thought the spacing was great, and it helped pace the writing a lot. I could take in everything slowly. I really liked the ...

Beautifully written, and completely true!! Maybe consider editing "One reason they are able to survive" to "A reason their little soul can stay alive." (Make it more detailed, and change ...

Hey, Unnatural here to review! :) I literally laughed as I read this, it's so true! I totally agree with this. Ok, let me get moving. First, you don't really ...

Lovely humorous, understandable story. Grammar and structure was flawless. I really have nothing to write here except praise. Oh, and just remember that you should put capital 'A' when you're ...

Hey Unnatural here. Great story. I can see how much thought you gave into this. There's so much meaning into this story :) I read this over like 3 times ...

Hey, Unnatural here! I'm sorry, I'm kind a critical reviewer if you don't mind :) I was immediately hooked into this story because of the title. I was like "what? ...

Wow great poem, the only things I want to say are: first, make sure you don't repeat to much. It sometimes seems abundant and looks like you're just repeating the ...

Hey, great story. :) Ok, so there are a few places where you could improve a little. First, how about some spaces and indentions? It looks all tight and compact. ...

This is a beautifully written tragic poem :'( I felt so empty the whole time I was reading it. I really like the italicized parts because I think they really ...