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Re: Don't butter my toast
thank you for your kind reviews. Vanadin. you are appreciated. in reference to the punctuation i shall refer you to my first poem. Lightening in the common room. thank you ...
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: Looking Glass
Auteur: Pourquoi avez-vous écrit votre revue en français? Nous sommes curieuses. Dalliance: je pense que c'est un peu trop long, ce serait plus efficace si c'etait plus courte.
May 26, 2010 -
Re: String Cheese
cheese makes me sick, not in any form. not even string, sorry about the bees and all that.
May 12, 2010 -
Re: John McCain
Obamama is gonna ring nick Clegg to congradulate him of his new PMness, oh wait i mean David Cameron. oh Dimbleby
May 12, 2010 -
Re: The Empowerment
i feel like the first four stanza's were the same thing, and then you forgot how to finish. you should have used copy and paste. heres this though, i like ...
May 12, 2010 -
Re: Cry for me
hats off to you sir, this is boss. the thrilling unsensical style is a marvel, again i say hats off. heres the other two cence. i absoluteally love this, and ...
May 12, 2010 -
Re: Words
A Poem about Words Preach! My minister. Your pretentious drivel Makes me feel a bit sickle Sorry but my words attack Please duck and cover We denounce your life and ...
May 5, 2010 -
Re: Poem about Poetry
A Poem about Poem about Poetry This Poem, about poetry connotes to me, the feeling of us I see the hidden message and it makes me want to jump This ...
May 5, 2010 -
Re: Adobe
I was quite dissappointed by this as my expectations were aimed more towards Adobe reader, i was genuinely expecting a nice ode to the computer programme. shame. but inspiration for ...
Apr 26, 2010 -
Re: In the News Today
I really like this poem because it is happy :) I liked the capitilissation of The other, as it bring to higlight the importance of children.
Apr 26, 2010 -
Re: The Steven Poem
Thank you for your pleasant commentary. I am struggling to discover this rating conundrum. Advice would be appreciated please :). I will also take your council in commencing to review ...
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: Lightening In The Common Room
so basically the grammaical errors were the point of the poem...who really cares if something is capitalised or there is a random piece of punctuation which is just sitting anywhere. ...
Dec 22, 2009
