TheTaleAsOldAsTime

Hi c: First off, I liked it. I liked the emotion in the writing and I liked the story behind it. But, the format threw me off a bit. I ...

Hello jefferyffe I enjoyed this a lot. I'm going to get a little personal here, but I am all for coal, mostly because of where I live and how I ...

Hello Dreamwalker.! Your writing is amazing. I love it so much. You write with such description, emotion and creativity. I look forward to your work. I think this poem is ...

Hello Znoink.! This is very very nice. I loved it so much. Poetry that reaches out and touch's ones emotions are my favorite and let me just say yours did ...

Drinkonthemoon, This is a tad twisted, somewhat weird, it left me thinking, it was perfect. I really like it. I really like your work.! There isn't much criticism here. You ...

This is amazing. I can't even describe how well done this is. It's some what mysterious in a way. The reason I say this is because it left me thinking. ...

Hi MaKriege! This is nice.! Very detailed and very graphic. I saw exactly what you wrote. The words reached out and touched me. I enjoy poetry because to me poems ...

I'm going to start by saying this is really good. It's somewhat cute too. c: I really don't have any critiques for you. This was a nice read.! Very detailed, ...

This is cute. I like dolphins ^-^. But I do have a couple critiques. 1- This is the incorrect format for a poem, and I personally get annoyed by that. ...

I'm going to do exactly what you ask. Give you a response about what this means to me. I feel as if this can be me on a bad day. ...

Hi. :D I'm going to say that this is cute. It's a nice way to tell someone you don't like them. haha Anyways, this is really good, it was a ...

Hello.! c: In general this is really good, and I am very excited to continue this story. Although, I do have a few critiques for you. 1- Yes, this is ...

SabrinaB3Rl, This is really good. I felt the emotion come from the masquerader. I honestly felt as if I WAS the masquerader. Keep up the good work.! c: ~Tale xxx

Dream Deep, One word, AMAZING. Overall it is very emotional and a little twisted. I enjoy genres like this very much. I didn't want to stop reading it. "He imagines ...

Hello Aaoftulsa, I enjoyed this a reminds me of my own writing actually. I honestly can't think of any critiques I can make on this. I sing your praise. Very ...