TheStormAroundMe

I like this. It's short and sweet, full of nostalgia and emotion. The period after "you" in the second line strikes me as unnecessary, so you may want to change ...

Hello! Storm here for the review! So the first thing I'll say is capitalization. It's generally frowned upon to capitalize the letter at the beginning of every single line, but ...

Hello! I love your poem, so there's not much to say, but I can say a few things. it is me This sounds a little awkward and halting to me. ...

Okay, so I know this poem has already got a ton of reviews, but I just loved it so much so I have to put in my two cents. Kill ...

Hello! It's Storm here for a review! So to start off, I would say that I found your paragraphs a bit daunting when I first looked at them. They're huge. ...

This poem is really short and sweet, which means that there isn't a lot I can say about it. Here goes! For they smell so sweet... With the way the ...

I am a huge fan of Hamilton, so of course I read this. This review is going to be pretty short, though. I get that this poem was based off ...

Hey! So, I really like the sad/nostalgic feel about this poem. Not capitalizing anything adds to this for me, and the incomplete sentences make it sound so longing... Great work, ...

Hello! The first things I noticed were some punctuation errors. They were making good time This sentence is in need of a period. “A scullery maid. Lyssa. Beautiful girl. She’s ...

Since it's review day, I'm here to review! Woah, that's all I have to say at first. I like the concept, where the stars have all disappeared. Have they burned ...

Wow. May I just say that I loved the spacing in this poem. It really added to the breathy and panicked feel of the composition. I also like the lack ...

Hello! The previous reviewer hit the nail right on the head when she said your imagery was great. I agree with her on her other point as well. "Sinner" looks ...

Hi! Well first of all, may I just say that I love the repetition of "broken boy, let me fix you / because your brokeness hurts me too." That was ...

I agree with the previous comment, there was a lot of description. That said, I did like the imagery that your descriptions conjured up. The wording was beautiful. If you ...

Hello! I'm here to review your work. Let's start at the beginning. "A bright light streaked through my eyelids causing them to flutter open. Of course, I couldn’t “see” the ...