I love it the symbolism used in this work is amazing I think it describes when a kid is young he looks up and sees hope in the night sky then when he is grown his child and him look up and he is shocked to realize there is no stars which could represent the loss of hope humanity feels in the future.I like the lines.
Time passed with shocking swiftness. The boy quickly became a man, and not long after had a boy of his own. One Christmas eve, after a filling Noche Buena, the man took his boy to the rooftop of his house. There, they sat on chairs and talked for hours.
"Anak, when you grow up, I want you to be the like Polaris, the brightest star in the sky. It always stays in place, and there it shines the brightest among the stars. You see, anak, Polaris is the star that-"
"Dad," the son interrupted, "what are you talking about? What's a star? What's a Polaris? Aren't these just old things that exist in fables?"
The man was shocked when he had heard this, for when he looked up, he saw no stars, no Polaris that shone brightly in the night sky.
There was just absolute silence, and perpetual darkness wherever he looked
Good job.
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