TheStormAroundMe

May I just say that your voice is amazing. It's so haunting and beautiful; I love it! The guitar is done well and the chorus really works. Did you have ...

First of all, you're right! I was SO FRUSTRATED that the TV show didn't follow the books. I thought it would be the redemption to that hideous excuse for a ...

Short and sweet, so I suppose I don't have a lot to say about it. I like the imagery there, where the reader gets a story even though it is ...

I want to hear the whole narrative behind this piece! There are some technical errors, such as lack of comma between "day" and "you" in the first sentence of the ...

Hello! This is Grace here for a review. To start off, I love the imagery. I can almost feel through the screen how much she loves this person. However, I ...

Hello! Okay, so I too thought the wording of this poem was a little cliche. Still, I could identify with it. I'm just going to point out a few things ...

Hello! As much as I liked the poem, I really didn't understand it or its connection to the title at all. Still, your flow of words and the order of ...

Hey! Grace here for the review. So first of all, on the matter of titles... All I could think of when I read this one was the mother from the ...

Hello! This is Grace here for a review. I can see that this piece has a deep resonance with you, so I just want to say that I've been in ...

First of all, tell her she's a writer. If she writes anything at all, she is a writer. Now, let's get down to the review! The frightened little girl frantically ...

Wow, that end was not what I expected... but I like it. This is Grace here to review! So first of all, there is the matter of capitalization. I used ...

I loved the optimism in this post, and the request for the Lord's help to get through. Your rhyme scheme is great, although "life" doesn't quite work as a rhyme ...

Hello! I agree with marmalade in the fact that this poem is very literal. I would very much appreciate some metaphor in there. Also, the rhyme scheme seems off-kilter. It's ...

Hello! Let's get reviewing! I mentally break down the air Into molecules I can manage Convince myself it's not truly empty space Not like the void Within myself- Nothing can ...

Hello! It's Storm here for a review (I'm kind of on a spree)! Let's get started. the sky knows how to play dress-up I like the imagery here! Come to ...