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Re: The Suicide Diary: Chapter 1
Well written, and interesting still. The main character gets some development and context, as does the environment they're in. The main problem is that this is way too short. The ...
Aug 6, 2015 -
Re: Thoughts
In my experience, asking yourself 'Why am I here?' too much can turn out to be fairly depressing. You might consider the fact that we are just ants on a ...
Jun 29, 2015 -
Re: The Suicide Diary: Prologue
The name of your story piqued my interest, but now you have my attention haha Good opening - I'm really curious as to what happens next. I assume after this ...
May 21, 2015 -
Re: Even when I am dead
Hello there~ First of all, the length of the poem is good. In my opinion, the thing you're trying to convey, boundless love that is, is expressed well in this ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Shadow light
Coins can be earned by reviewing the works of your fellow writers! As I'm curious to the rest, I'll review this in the mean time. As my predecessor said, having ...
Apr 22, 2015 -
Re: Raya's Heritage Chapter Two
This was a nice read! The writing was simple and clear, very to the point and sleek so to say. While I like the premise of your story, and your ...
Apr 22, 2015 -
Re: A Thief but No Murderer- Chapter 1
300 years ago the United Nations passed the law that the earth and all its peoples would revert back to the way it was during medieval times. The atmosphere had ...
Apr 22, 2015 -
Re: I Have Achieved the Impossible
Hallow! This poem kinda interested me, and felt like I could write something meaningful about~ I have achieved the impossible task of breaking through your rock walls which you used ...
Dec 19, 2014 -
Re: The Population of the great pandas!
Haha, as a panda lover myself I'm inclined to give somewhat of an answer to this (: In general, panda's are the most expensive animals in a zoo to be ...
Dec 18, 2014 -
Re: Deceptions
Interesting! This is my very first review, so take it with a grain of salt~ For one, I'd say that some parts are a little too vague, such as the ...
Dec 17, 2014
