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Hey abdullah, Shauzer here reviewing :) I didn't really enjoy the start of this poem. it was complicated and confusing and you looked like you were starting on a new ...

Hey yadanialler, Shauzer here reviewing :) Nice poem, it was a good idea. I liked the main character, everybody's had a serious crush at some point so it's a nice ...

Hey Patrick, Shauzer here reviewing :) I thought this poem was, as said below, very deep and I know there are a lot of poets out there who would thank ...

Hey CesareBorgia - nice name by the way - Shauzer here reviewing :) I really liked how you did this poem, it was unique, which immediately gave it an advantage ...

Hey Dreamer :) Shauzer here reviewing :) I liked this poem, it fits with your name - sounds like a dream. There are a few problems though. I didn't like ...

Hello Anna, Shauzer here reviewing :) I really, really liked this poem. I liked the idea, the romantic encounter - which gave you so much more material to write about, ...

Hey Laure, Shauzer here reviewing :) I liked this poem a lot. This is rare for me, since I can't remember the last poem so short I enjoyed. I think ...

Hi BitterRosemary, Shauzer here reviewing :) This poem was very powerful, it had nice imagery, it told a story as well as having a very nice flow and finishing very ...

Hi Finn, Shauzer here reviewing :) I liked this poem, but not very much. it was rather mediocre. i don't mean to be mean, but there are so many more ...

Hi wordsy, Shauzer here reviewing :) I loved this poem. it was short, it was sweet. I realize it's part one, and I see a lot of potential in this. ...

Hi Jaimini, Shauzer here reviewing. This was a nice poem, it was a good idea and well executed. As the previous reviewer said, you don't see many poems about teachers ...

Hi Purple, Shauzer here reviewing :) I really liked this poem. It had a strong feel to it, you conveyed the message really clearly and i experienced very strong empathy ...

Hey vluvswriting, sorry if this review is hurried but.... well, I'm in a hurry. Shauzer here reviewing :) I liked the first few lines of this poem the best. I ...

Hello Senjiku, Shauzer here reviewing :) To be honest, I didn't really like this story. But hey, that just means the review will be more helpful :D It's not the ...

Hi Sushi (almost typed Cerys there :D), Shauzer here reviewing, Just want you to know that for the most part the writing was excellent, grammar perfect, but there were some ...