TheShauzer

Hey Kayley ;) TS here reviewing. I like the poem, you know that. The first part of this review is gonna be working on the way it's structured, sentence length ...

Hey ;) TS here reviewing. I prefer this one to the last simply because there's more - even though both are pretty nice. Is this a progressive piece? Like, you ...

Hey Evzzer, TS here reviewing ;) Your piece was really nice but I'd love to see more. You've brought to life the fact that this person is fragile, that they're... ...

Hey CodyKnight, So sorry it took so long to review, I've been studying :'( I really really enjoyed the first chapter, can't wait for the second one. I'll admit, this ...

Hey Nerdylilme, I like the idea of this poem since it is so relatable and I get where you're coming from. I'm in a pretty healthy LDR right now so ...

Hey RadiantShadow, I have one thing to say - **** happens. I say that in the most sympathizing way possible. Depression is the biggest shadow hanging over us. It confuses, ...

Hey plantedheart, I think a lot could be done to this poem to make it better. Your use of vocabulary is nice. But I think that you're kind of banking ...

Hey Necobella :) I enjoyed this piece quite a bit. I think that it was very creative and a nice little story too. I do think that you could have ...

Hey rebel, nice one you got here. I like your idea, and I appreciated the use of vocab and the obvious effort put into the rhyming scheme. I also liked ...

Hey TigerLilly, this is excellent. I love what you did with this. I mean, it's such a complex topic and there are so many 'what-if's' and 'but's' and what not. ...

Hey Mad, I'm back again. Seems you're in the spotlight for every piece you write, cool! Anyway, the poem. I'm not sure I've fallen for it just yet. I have ...

Aaaaand yes. Wow. I really liked it :D This poem was great SilverFox! It started a bit vague, I found, and you have to change 'becoming' to 'beckoning' in the ...

Hey :) Here because I told you I would review aaages ago and completely forgot to. This is a cool poem. I was thinking about writing an apocalyptic piece but ...

Hey Kitten, I liked the piece. I thought that some parts do need work though. Were you being ironic when you were saying things like "I got them memories," and ...

Ah, beautiful, Stranger. This is a very well written piece. I loved the ideas you presented and how you presented them; I think you made pretty okay use of imagery ...