TheRobster1991

To be very honest with you, I didn't understand it. The only thing that I got from it was the mind that is hurt, but in what way? I can't ...

This is so funny. I guess it's supposed to be humourous right. It made me chuckle but alas there's not much advice for critical construction that I could give. It's ...

Wow... there hasn't there been a time when we all felt like God gave the best features to somebody else. Very real, very deep. Alot of depth. A few things ...

This sounds like it would make a great song, I liked it, alot. It's kind of like a goodbye to everyone forever. I'm not sure what you mean by: Well ...

They were funny, I laughed. But there is something you need to fix. "Episode 3: Proposal" Laura is sitting alone on the bench, where Paul had asked her to meet ...

Hahaha!!! Very funny! Interesting poem! Very clever, too clever almost. There's nothing I could say for improvement that other people had already told you themselves. It was really clever in ...

I'm not sure if it is obvious but the girl was looking in a mirror. Did anyone understand that? I didn't know that until you said it. It wasn't all ...

One thing I really liked about this poem is that it can be taken from different perspectives. First of all: it could be interpreted as a deep hatred of the ...

It was a nice poem. I personally think it should be called 111 Times as it is in the poem twice: bleakness interrupted 111 times and and smile 111 times ...

What I really love about this poem is that it starts off with saying who is innocent but then it really packs the punch and delivers the punch line. I ...

Fall, fall, watch him fall. Thump, thump, she's thrown to the floor. I really don't know, but this verse made me think of the Nazi's when they threw the Jews ...

The thing that I don't understand is why some verses have three lines while others have four. They don't have a pattern to them in that one verse has four, ...

I really like this poem. The words inbetween the verses made more of an impact and was like a verse in themselves. Nailed. Savior. Forgive. Worship. Forgotten. For us. And ...

I’m walking through life, not quite dead, not quiet alive I can’t feel my soul, and I can’t feel my heart, if I can’t live without you, then why are ...

I liked how it was very descriptive. You can actually picture the male's hands. Spread like a star, his hands are big Thick and strong, a cord of muscle ripples ...