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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Disputatores- Chapter 5

    As I've already said, I was not notified of this... So now I shall review! Stuff Usually this high up in the mountains, the bigger, more dangerous interfectores can’t survive, ...

    Oct 12, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Magic Awaits You -- Chapter 3

    So, I think you got the impression that I was writing my review on my phone... I wasn't. I hate typing anything on my phone... So, if I ever don't ...

    Oct 3, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Disputatores- Chapter 4

    Oh, that twist at the end. I mean, I guess it was to be expected. Kinda like evolution. Even though you said it was adaptation... Anyway... Stuff So, this isn't ...

    Oct 1, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Why?

    Hello there! This is my last review before I finish RevMo! Also, welcome to YWS! I needed some sort of introduction so... Anyway, onto stuff! Stuff Ok, don't take this ...

    Sep 29, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Bullies

    Guess who got really emotional reading this? Me. I'm used to the kind of bullying that happens to Sam. Except that the bullying comes from me... So I guess it's ...

    Sep 29, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Warriors Of Elements: Chapter 1

    Hello there! I'm here to deliver a review. Now, I'm a really big fan when it comes to being able to control elements, and since you added the Doctor in ...

    Sep 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Attack on the Fourth Circle

    Hello there! I think I liked this chapter a lot more than the last one, mainly because there's slightly more action. And I was getting an Elfen Lied vibe at ...

    Sep 29, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, Mystery / Suspense Re: deathless death

    Hello there! I'm here because I really want to finish RevMo (FOUR MORE REVIEWS!). Anyway, I really liked this. I liked the concept, but there are some things I would ...

    Sep 28, 2015
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Other Re: Young Justice: Beast Boy's Christmas Part One.

    Hello there! I'm not a big fan of Justice League or whatever, but I know Superman... That's about it. I'm not sure who Beast Boy is, but he kinda reminds ...

    Sep 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Revolution Begins

    Hello there! I'm here to deliver a review. This is a good way to start you story. I like the whole idea of taking back your freedom. Kinda sounds like ...

    Sep 28, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Dramatic Re: Don't Lie To Me

    That was some roller coaster. Kinda. I liked the little twist at the end. It really made me think about the meaning behind this story. Meaning (what I think) Personally, ...

    Sep 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Horror Re: Chapter one: The dead city

    Hello there! So, this was a fairly short chapter but it's definitely interesting. I'm wondering what happened to cause him to ask himself how he's the only one that survived. ...

    Sep 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: The Society's Rule

    Hello there! I saw this work a while back, but I didn't review as it had already got a few so... yeah. But now I'm going to since you asked! ...

    Sep 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Disputatores- Chapter 3

    You know, I'm pretty sure I asked you to tag me. Oh well, I'm here so let's get started. Well, I'm the only one getting started. You can get started ...

    Sep 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: The New Generation--Chapter Five: Going on a Quest

    Just realised you're a bit inconsistent with your titles. For Chapter 4 you used a number instead of words which you did for the other three. I thought I'd point ...

    Sep 28, 2015


The strongest people are not those who show their true strength in front of us but those who win battles we know nothing about.
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