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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Disputatores- Chapter 5

    As I've already said, I was not notified of this... So now I shall review! Stuff Usually this high up in the mountains, the bigger, more dangerous interfectores can’t survive, ...

    Oct 12, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Magic Awaits You -- Chapter 3

    So, I think you got the impression that I was writing my review on my phone... I wasn't. I hate typing anything on my phone... So, if I ever don't ...

    Oct 3, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Disputatores- Chapter 4

    Oh, that twist at the end. I mean, I guess it was to be expected. Kinda like evolution. Even though you said it was adaptation... Anyway... Stuff So, this isn't ...

    Oct 1, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Why?

    Hello there! This is my last review before I finish RevMo! Also, welcome to YWS! I needed some sort of introduction so... Anyway, onto stuff! Stuff Ok, don't take this ...

    Sep 29, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Bullies

    Guess who got really emotional reading this? Me. I'm used to the kind of bullying that happens to Sam. Except that the bullying comes from me... So I guess it's ...

    Sep 29, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Warriors Of Elements: Chapter 1

    Hello there! I'm here to deliver a review. Now, I'm a really big fan when it comes to being able to control elements, and since you added the Doctor in ...

    Sep 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Attack on the Fourth Circle

    Hello there! I think I liked this chapter a lot more than the last one, mainly because there's slightly more action. And I was getting an Elfen Lied vibe at ...

    Sep 29, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, Mystery / Suspense Re: deathless death

    Hello there! I'm here because I really want to finish RevMo (FOUR MORE REVIEWS!). Anyway, I really liked this. I liked the concept, but there are some things I would ...

    Sep 28, 2015
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Other Re: Young Justice: Beast Boy's Christmas Part One.

    Hello there! I'm not a big fan of Justice League or whatever, but I know Superman... That's about it. I'm not sure who Beast Boy is, but he kinda reminds ...

    Sep 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Revolution Begins

    Hello there! I'm here to deliver a review. This is a good way to start you story. I like the whole idea of taking back your freedom. Kinda sounds like ...

    Sep 28, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Dramatic Re: Don't Lie To Me

    That was some roller coaster. Kinda. I liked the little twist at the end. It really made me think about the meaning behind this story. Meaning (what I think) Personally, ...

    Sep 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Horror Re: Chapter one: The dead city

    Hello there! So, this was a fairly short chapter but it's definitely interesting. I'm wondering what happened to cause him to ask himself how he's the only one that survived. ...

    Sep 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: The Society's Rule

    Hello there! I saw this work a while back, but I didn't review as it had already got a few so... yeah. But now I'm going to since you asked! ...

    Sep 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Disputatores- Chapter 3

    You know, I'm pretty sure I asked you to tag me. Oh well, I'm here so let's get started. Well, I'm the only one getting started. You can get started ...

    Sep 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: The New Generation--Chapter Five: Going on a Quest

    Just realised you're a bit inconsistent with your titles. For Chapter 4 you used a number instead of words which you did for the other three. I thought I'd point ...

    Sep 28, 2015


Most people ignore most poetry because most poetry ignores most people.
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