ThePatchworkPilgrims

Greetings Deanie! Okay, let's keep this short and sweet (or if you don't like sweet, any other flavour will work). I usually start with vocabulary and grammar, but both are ...

Greetings dragonfphoenix! Firstly I want to ask: Is this poem similar to the Wizard of Oz tale with Dorothy in Kansas with a tornado coming? (It looks similar in any ...

Greetings Crunch! First and foremost I have to say that I love this story! It might be in a poem form, but this is a very intriguing story line. Now, ...

Greetings Eferhilda! Firstly I would like to welcome you to YWS! May you enjoy every moment on this website! Anyway, I should stop ranting! Back to the sonnet! I like ...

Greetings Therese! This is one exceptional poem! You said that you aren't great at writing poetry, but this piece proves that very statement wrong. I love the way you describe ...

Greetings Daisydreams! Firstly I would like to welcome you to YWS. I hope you'll enjoy every moment you're here. Anywaaay, back to the poem. I usually start with grammar and ...

Greetings James! Let's keep this short and sweet. Your vocabulary and grammar are still up to scratch (not that ever wasn't, of course), and I like your descriptive talents. my ...

Greetings Jarred First of all I have to mention that I like the title. It intrigued me from the moment I saw it, and it has made my imagination run ...

Greetings WindSailor Firstly I have to say that I love your title. It drew my attention immediately, and now that I have read the poem I think it works perfectly. ...

Greetings Percybeth I love dogs and I was drawn to this piece like a moth to a candle. The free verse poem-style fits a piece like this very well (a ...

Greetings Retrodisc First of all I love the title! It fits perfectly with the poem! This piece is very good and I enjoyed reading it. I like the way you ...

Greetings, Delirium My God! I still can't believe that this really happened to you! My deepest condolences. Now, back to the poem. Your vocabulary is very fitting to this piece, ...

Greetings wtppowers Firstly: Interesting title. It took me a while to understand it, but I finally got it and I think it fits the piece. Your vocabulary is suitable and ...

Greetings etherealember! I don't usually review poems, but because maths has always had a special place in my heart, I decided I should give this a shot. First of all ...

Hi Aurora First things first: I love your novel's name! When I stumbled upon it in the Greenroom I was hooked immediately. I am in what one can call a ...