TheOneNamedZoe

Hello! Here for a review! So I did not fully understand the poem Is the lover dead? Was the lover an ex, who left his fortune to you? Either way, ...

Hello, it's review time! I just want to say you are totally brave to be posting a poem like this. I wouldn't be able to go back into those memories ...

Review time! I very much enjoy this poem. Nice imagery. Question: does this speak of... Suicidal thoughts? Or wanting to actually become one with the stars? I ask this because ...

Alright, Review time! I absolutely loved the emotion in this, so onward to nitpicking! "My heat beat rapidly because it knew every owner of eyes"-Heart instead of heat. ... Well ...

Review time! I love the beautiful "Love" Feel to this, but on to nitpicking. Second line, did you mean "Care?" Secondly, honestly to keep a rhythm, try and actually imply ...

Review time! This is a rather dark poem. And I LOVE it. I can definitely tell where this is coming from, I read Night not too long ago. The slowly ...

Review time! I enjoy this type of poem, and I'll admit, it hit me hard. I have been in this case of anxiety leading into suicidal thoughts, and it's a ...

Review time! Man, this was deep. It actually relates to me in all honesty. Writing and Drawing is my life, but I get yelled at for both. Told what I ...

Review time! Seeing the other stanzas do not have this, perhaps change the first line to "I toss my steel heart into the open flame, to see my soul in ...

Review time! Well, starting it off bluntly, you might want to change the category to lyrical, dramatic. I can tell from the start that this is a rap, or at ...

Review time! If this was something that came from your mind, then I will say this simply, I am a little concerned for your well being. I have had very ...

Review time! I can't exactly give a definite review on this since I am in a happy, healthy relationship but I will try! I agree with Moonwatcher. remove the it, ...

Review time! A story about modern life? Or ancient conflict? I really cannot tell, but from what I'm reading it's rather creative. I enjoyed the talk of feasts and war, ...

Review time! Okay, let me just say this poem touched my heart deeply. I have a little sister who is seven months old so I could (Or better worded, my ...

Review time! Well this is very figurative to put it simply. However, I had to actually read it a few times over and yet I am still confused. Who is ...