TheMadWriter

Imagination is such a wonderful thing to express and you have shown the beauty of a celestial festival. I didn't just read about a starry dinner party, I was there! ...

If ever there was a way to grimly captivate one's audience, this would be a chief example. I am drawn into the insane and ungodly madness of the story you've ...

...FUUUU YOUR A STALKER! ...Ahem! Excuse my reaction it's just...I have a bit of an issue with meeting people eyes when I have a problem. Professional: This poem speaks volumes ...

Watch 'The Matrix' much? Seriously, what is this about, getting high? I think the poem confuses me more than anything and I decipher stuff like how the Final Fantasy games ...

Really, really good. A very real and possible situation I think. This girl can't handle the pain of losing her parents so she traps herself in a world where she ...

A very good and gripping beginning. Though just one issue... What. Is. Going. ON! At first I thought there was an error with the word layer and that you meant ...

Very good and colorful in the description. It had a very real and yet, at the same time, figurative feel to it. As if I was both physically walking into ...

I am not going to cry. I am not going to cry 'cause that isn't the saddest thing ever... But it sure comes close! I love this poem! I had ...

Um...What? Don't get me wrong, this is a very good poem but it confuses me a bit. Even so, looking at it from a professional view, this is a short ...

A very interesting and sweet short story. It was very complete on itself and had a very solid world to work off of. I found the ending bittersweet but still, ...