It’s hard to say goodbye
It’s hard to walk away
I can’t find the courage to let it go
But I’m finding it hard to stay.
Leaving will be the best for us
For I cannot achieve much staying here
But deep in your eyes I see the tears
I can see the hurt in your heart
I can hear you whispering, ‘Never say goodbye’
Better days lie ahead
Far from the corners of these walls
I must leave, yet to return
There are dreams I must pursue
Goals I must accomplish
I valued our friendship and love
I cherish every moment we shared
Don’t forget the times I made you smile
Or even the moments I made you cry.
Though I walk away, the bond still holds us together
I’ll never say goodbye.
When I’m gone, don’t assume anything has changed
Though things will never be the same again
But when you remember me, and feel hurt
It’s okay to cry to the memories of me
Pray for me everyday that God may keep me
You may not hear my voice always as before
Things I always did might be left undone, quite often
Words I never said would always be left unsaid
But don’t ask why I left, for we must meet to part
Let the hope of meeting again be your driving force
For this is never goodbye.
I ‘m proud of meeting someone like you
I’m glad we bore all the challenges together
I cannot forget you or what we’ve been through
Your kindness and firmness and strength
Through the trying times and the happy days
Has made me believe you were made for those moments
No matter how far we go or who we become
I believe our paths will surely cross again
And forever we shall never say goodbye!
- Anyim Humphrey.
From my Poem Book - DIAMOND COLLECTIONS. All rights Reserved.
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Hay nice poem Its quite power full. I enjoyed reading it It's sad and hopeful at the same time its cleaver. I am not good at English so I have no suggestions and I did not see any spelling mistakes so OK. For a poem it was Quite long but that's just my opinion and its a good size but I am just going on to reach the 250 character mark. All in all I enjoyed it can not wait to see more. ( Also I don't under stand Did you right this or did you copy it and put this down: - Anyim Humphrey.
From my Poem Book - DIAMOND COLLECTIONS. All rights Reserved
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sincerely TGS
Thank you TGS for enjoying this poem. I wrote the poem myself and 'DIAMOND COLLECTION' is a collection of all the poems I've written. I'm the copyright owner of this poem and many more that I'll be sharing in consequent posts. You may follow me to get my posts immediately they are up or you can check back as often as possible. Thanks again.
Will do
I am not going to cry. I am not going to cry 'cause that isn't the saddest thing ever...
But it sure comes close!
I love this poem! I had to move in order to go to school and I left behind a lot of friends.(Well, it's a lot compared to how many I have now...)
Though I live close to my friends, I still miss being close enough to go into town whenever freaking felt like it!
I also will note that this reminds me of a song called Magic Mirror, originally Japanese, it has a brilliant English cover by Sirhammet(That is his actual Youtube profile name).
A great and heartfelt poem that I personally think would work best when listening to Xion's theme from Kingdom Hearts 358/2 Days.
Bravo sir/madam!
Thanks a bunch! Friends make our moments fascinating. The girls that show you kindness and the guys that have your back anytime. It's just so sad to leave them all behind. Glad you loved it...and please do check back for future posts.
hi, rikki here for a review .
The piece looks nicely composed but it is way too long
The poem seems to be descriptive but a reader will surely do his/her's bit to live it to the fullest.
Personally, i am more attracted towards poetry than prose or stories. The reason being that they are more appealing to me than anything else in written composition.
Keep writing. Be inspired and motivated.
All the very Best.
Thanks a lot rikki. To me, poetry is more of self expression in vivid language. That's why I choose to write with free verse instead of constraining my ideas to adhere to certain meter or pattern. It's a long one, I must agree with you! Thank you once again for reading it all through, and do check back for my future posts. Best Regards!
- Humphrey.