TheDayBeforeTomorrow

Hi Ghost, I'm Day and I'm here to review your story. *blinks again* What to say? This is a perfect case of too-much-good-writing-in-one-day. I just read a mind-blowing poem and ...

Oh my goodness. *blinks* I'm forgetting my manners. Hi, Amii, I'm Day and I'm here to review your poem. This was undoubtedly the best poem I've reviewed or read, ever ...

Hi Pandorax, I'm Day and I'm here to review your poem! I absolutely loved this piece! I'm a big fan of Greek/Roman mythology (thank you, Rick Riordan, for introducing me ...

Hi Emily, I'm Day and I'm here to review your story! This is so funny! I was laughing so hard at the end. It's disgusting (sort of), but definitely funny. ...

Hi Luxe, I'm Day and I'm here to review your story! I really liked this! The amount of detail that you've put into showing how much our protagonist (is it ...

Hi Satellite, I'm Day (Welcome to YWS, by the way), and I'm here to review your story! I really, really liked this story! I love how you've taken the totally ...

Hey tgirly, I'm Day and I'm here to review your story! Let me start by saying that I think it's wonderful! The incredible detail that you've managed to fit into ...

Hey Flyer, I'm Day and I'm here to review your poem! :) First off, I would just like to say... Wow. This is amazing! I love the way you've focused ...

Hey anna, I'm here to review again. Well, I found this to be better. You did go into how James feels about being with someone like Lucy, who keeps on ...

Hi anna, I'm Day and I'm here to review! I really liked this! This seemed almost effortlessly good. The description here doesn't slow down the reading process; I love how ...

Hey DarkShadows, I'm Day and I'm here to review this chapter! First off, I really like this piece! It's mysterious and sinister, and I love that it doesn't have much ...

Hey Sky, I'm Day and I'm here to review your poem. (Yes, that was necessary, even though you already know me...) Well, I liked this piece, but there are some ...

Hey there Nightshade, I'm Day and I'm here to review your poem. :) First off, I loved it! It's so realistic and typical of teenagers and the younger generation these ...

Hey, Angel! Here to review like I said I would. :) I think this was an awesome piece. It would qualify as a short story though, like flash fiction. The ...

Hi there! I'm here to review your poem. First off, this was pretty good. Easy to read, you have a nice flow going here, and I really liked the theme ...