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LOL. Unserious, but good for the lulz.

This poem is simple, but a great metaphor. I like how you spiraled everything down, just like the progressing cold and bareness of fall. Very well done, I also love ...

I really like this poem, and can totally relate to it. Music IS freedom. My favorite stanza is the last one, it's got some great images. Nice work.

Aw! I think you've captured a great emotion and idea here. The feeling that teenage love isn't supposed to be anything, but feels like everything. I like the way you ...

I like this. I like how you can "hear" hearts breaking. I have to say the rhyme scheme is all over the place, but overall, it's a good concept.

Well, that be awesome. What a sweet little ending. It's just a cute, funny little drabble. No concrit, just saying that it's awesome :)

I lol'd seriously. If it's got the pope in it... it's a funny poem. Nothing like a little funny to get you smiling. Nice work.

This poem is alright, but I really can't garner a meaning from it. Also, replace "ain't" like everyone said. Sorry for such a vague answer, but I really couldn't understand ...

Well, this is genius. I agree with every point made. Very well done, I lol'd :D

This is great song! Ha, I lol'd. The only thing I can critique is the amount of private jokes.... it makes no sense if you don't get it. Anyway, good ...

Thanks!

It rhymes a bit strangely, but made me smile :) Good work.

This is interesting. I confess to be not really knowing much about the Cold War (is this the time period? 0_o), but this was good. I like the way you ...

The soft, leafy steam was tender and fragrant. I can just see[i] and taste[/i] the tea here! Imaginary jazz meandered in the space between. Tea and jazz. They mix perfectly ...

I had to read it a few times to get the rhyme scheme, but it's good. A little short, but it's to the point. Very nice.