Tessitore

Most of the items I would have brought up have been. I did not like the ending so much, it seemed to interrupt the flow of the poem. I also ...

Very good. AA said a lot of the things I would have said, but there's still a few I'd point out: I think you could do from adding a little ...

An interesting read for sure, but there are a few things I would change. Azila seems to have caught most of them, however, so I'll just give you a synopsis ...

I don't remember how many times I cried... but it was a lot. I was given a pirated copy by a friend (bad, I know) then went out and bought ...

Very good books, but have a major disappointing drop-off after 'Obsidian Butterfly'. If you like Anita Blake, read the Merry Gentry series--but beware, for it's an R rated fluff stuff ...

OK... It seems like you have an interesting point to put across in this poem, a poem which is very close to my heart, actually. Yet still, I feel like ...

Very nice, I genuinely enjoyed the stanza breaks and the way the poem flowed. There was definatley a nice story to the piece as well. clothes by the flagpole, and ...

If you liked SOTL, you simply have to pick up the next installment, Hannibal. The movie was not anything as wonderful as the book, which is so bizaar and horrific ...

I agree with Incandescence in essence. There is some imagery here but that's about all. I can see some religious tones and some personal-issues that you may have wanted to ...

I liked this poem, because it reminded me of life situations I've been in. It really put a heap of reality into it. The end stanzas were a little too ...

I did not like the last part. Not a bit. But other then that, this poem was marvelous, once again. I think you're quickly becoming one of my favorite poets ...

This was an awesome piece but, honestly, I thought it could do to be longer. It does come to a rather dramatic end and all, and I may just like ...

Of course when I first read this poem I was all, "What's he talking about? I'm confused." So then I scampered off to read Faith's poem and it makes a ...

I think I was getting a tad bored of this poem until the last stanza, in which case I errupted into goosebumps. Cause I've felt that a million times before ...

Marvy poem, babe, simply brilliant. Suggestion: And morality makes catching ‘em all, all too rough, Because I just want to kiss someone, Is that so much to ask? Between the ...