Hi Baby faith Good morning (': I'm Riothe Selcouth, pleasure to read the one of your masterpieces.But, am going to critique it.
Here, Faith I know, While you are writing this piece you have a strong inspiration.
"Revelation" is your title and that's very capturing. My first impression is it's kinda creepy and wierd lol, but it's actually scary .
I know, we have different perspectives when it comes of writing and expressing of emotions and feelings.
That's all.
I just want to say as a writer. Keep on writing, keep your pen's up. Spread your words and thoughts to all of us. Thank you.
—riothe selcouth 🍂
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