Temi

As was stated in the review below, simplicity is what's in play and simplicity is the way to go. I enjoyed the poem because it does give off a lyrical ...

This has a beautiful concept. However, I don't think it's a poem. It does have a poetic feel to it... I think you should also check the word play in ...

We used to be stars, once. (scratch the once; the ''used to be'' has done the job) We used to twinkle, and they used to point their(I fee a word ...

presence is apart from what eyes can see and hear and feel and smell (scratch this line, no need of it; ruins the rhythm) presence is in movement, a steady ...

Subtle beauty is what this is... This poem creates an atmosphere of eerie innocence submerged perversity at the same time! (My interpretation). Word Choice: Simplicity is what I found, and ...

The first day, we all knew. This big group of nerds, of all shapes and sizes in one room. Sounds dangerous to some, but we took the challenge. Fate-shipper, crew ...

I like what you've done with this poem and especially your use of a ''matter-of-fact'' voice. It helps convey a level of truthfulness to your poem which is needed to ...

Smog fills the once clear skies. The blackness pools and (This seems a bit too basic, I would have said something like ''The darkness dances to the tune of convergence/hiding ...

This is extremely interesting particularly because the moment I finished reading the poem a single thought just popped in my head- ''beauty to betrayal''. I am absolutely amused by a ...

Funny enough, I am depressed, facing some serious issues bigger than I can handle (could be a bad idea reviewing in this mood)... Anyway, to review: Your poem has this ...

I have to say I am amused by this poem largely due to its simplicity. However, some few things I didn't feel comfortable with: ''I pull, jerk, and tug, but ...

First of all, thank God! God knows I needed this. Given the fact that the the earlier review focused on the grammar and structure of the poem, I would like ...

Thank God this was a poem! Because objectively, I would argue with most of your views stated, on the point of logic and more. However, never mind that. Now to ...

To review: ''He stepped alone Into the forest of life (The term ''forest'' to describe life is simply fantastic when you build the relationship between the characteristics of a forest ...

This is quite interesting! It had a sort of "bouncy" feel to it. However, the strength of this poem seems to me also to be its weakness. I can understand ...