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Tay01

  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Change is a Choice

    Hello, Tay 01 here to review your poetry. Yes, I liked it and it was worth publishing it because, you have got a review from me now. I really understood ...

    Feb 8, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Thankyou Note

    Hi, Tay01 here for a quick review. Let's not blabber around and just jump straight to the point, shall we? First of all, this is a very awe poetry. It ...

    Feb 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 44.

    This is a real good Chapter 44. This is awesome. I only spotted a mistake, a past tense and present tense part. The rest, I'm not really strong at, honestly, ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Do Not Go Gentle - Part 3

    Hello, pieceofwords, Tay01 here, form the Blue Moon, here to review you Chapter 3. Although, I have not read your chapters 1 and 2. I hope you learn something form ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Depression

    Well this is quite a poem. Way better than the Deafen Ears poem. This one has a far much more meaning, and yes, I love it way way better. This ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Deafen ears

    Hello, fallenoutofgrace, Tay01 here with another review. I am from the Blue Moon (or the blue team you can call it). First. The only thing you need to work on ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Dual Identity - Prologue

    Hello, Tay01 from the Blue Moon, here to review your novel/chapter. As this is review day, I will, of course, REVIEW!!! Well, to start with, this is a very general, ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Bad Wolf

    This story is just like the story of the big bad wolf, an old children's story those times and even still, now's time. Like the three little pigs, you have ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: With Him

    This is a very nice and clean poem. IT is basically something to imagine and you have done it quite far. I am actually quite amazed by your literally work. ...

    Jan 24, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Writer's Block

    An empty slot may be exactly what you are thinking of, a writers block. A block for writers to write. But nobody, nobody realises that you have somehow done somehing ...

    Jan 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The one you love

    This is really an awe poem/poetry or whatever you call it! I should think that this is very good for a marriage BECAUSE This is is important! Nothing is better ...

    Jan 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Never a tomorrow.

    There will never be a tomorrow. NO, there would not. There will never have a tomorrow, That is all to see. The light is hidden in the shadow, That is ...

    Jan 24, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Invisible

    Well, to start with, this is actually pretty simple, but yet really meaningful. I liked the part where you described the whole thing as invisible, as about you have mentioned, ...

    Jan 23, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Brain Dead Creativitiy

    Well, this poem is really, as you have said, or mentioned in the overall of the poem, yes, it is really a waste of points. But let me show you, ...

    Jan 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Paper in the Wind

    Yes, very true. Very very true. I believe that you are right. What everybody does not know is that if we stick together, just like the stack of papers, we ...

    Jan 14, 2015


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