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Very well done! This is packed full of lovely poetic devices, so I will only mention my favorites. I loved the lack of punctuation. I felt this really contributed to ...

I decided to head over to the green room to see if there was any nice cheary poetry to review. This looks promising! There were some very nice lines here, ...

It's a be very clever piece, the idea that this couple, who appear to be most of the way through breaking up, were made for each other. I also like ...

The moral of the story is.... To be successful EAT PUMPKIN PIE! Firstly I would like to compliment you on your message, it certainly makes a change to love poems! ...

This is a simply lovely poem, and firstly I would like to compliment you on your rhymes. None of the rhymes seem at all forced, and some are simply lovely, ...

This is a very nice poem with a slightly broken rhythm that makes the reader uneasy, and several deep meanings behind your words. I think the quote at the beginning ...

Firstly let me say well done by taking the harder option and taking the time to make it rhyme (see what I did there :-) ). However I feel a ...

Hello there, I am from "Review the person above you". I am new to "Will review for food" so if have made an horrendous mistake please tell me! I don't ...

A very pretty little work, which is exactly what it says ot the tin. I think you tried to do some clever HTML thingy with the word US, however, on ...

This is a lovely poem, with a wonderful moomin like feel ro it, as well as a deeper darker meaning. The only line I would change is "I land on ...

I have a split mind over whether this is perfect or whether this should be poetry. It could be poetry, if it were broken up and paced. Yet methinks whatever, ...

What an amazing work! This piece is almost totally and unbiasedly observational, and follows my own doctrine, what do other people think of you? I also really liked the character ...

Yeehaw! This is the simple yet rather daft conclusion that I derive from this work. The moral of the story is (fanfare plus drum roll) do not fight sleep because ...

Well done Silverlock! Thanks firstly for the notes at the top! First my criticism. I feel this is misplaced. This is no short story. In my mind this is art. ...

Right, first of all, well done! You have made a leap into the brave new world of poetry. This went down really well with me, and your little note was ...