TakeThatYouFiend

This is quite beautiful, it is my honour to review it for you! Firstly I'd like to say something about the formatting. I think that, because the two last lines ...

Hello there, you, lucky chap, have got me to review for you! The main impression I got from this piece was the infant-like speach, still grappling with the concept of ...

This truly is a very nice poem, with the bare minimum of glitches. That said, there are a number of points I wish to make about the first verse, which ...

I don't know how much you'll agree with these critiques, but I give them anyway, take them or leave them. Just looking at the first paragraph now, a couple of ...

O.k. this review will be largely analytical, but I really enjoy the challenge of writing a review for a haiku. I think Iit is fine as it is, and any ...

Joshuapaul below me has already written a frankly amazing review, so I'll just go over what I think are your three major flaws here. Firstly, I think you introduced the ...

Velly clever :-) I don't really have critique for this, but I'll do my best. First, just a technical issue, there probably should be an age rating on this. I ...

Oh, creepy. This was quite an interesting little escapade, getting a happy 7/10 on the fiendscale, but there seem to me to be a couple of minute glitches. Firstly I ...

This review is written as I read, so I'll take this in order. First off, I dislike the repetition of finish in the first paragraph. This seems slightly unprofessional and ...

This, as expected was great. There are only a few things I would point out if I may, and these are only suggestions. Firstly, I dislike the use of exclamation ...

I'm not going to pretend that I wholly understood that, but to me it seems rather like some sort of feverish memories. And taking into account the last line, perhaps ...

This was very nice for the most part, with a couple of minute glitches. Firstly, you have rhymed friends with friend. This seems minor but stood out like a sore ...

In terms of rhyme pattern this kinda reminded me of seasons in the sun by Terry Jacks, and both this and the aforementioned song are beautiful works. I have a ...

This was quite nice. I have but a couple minute criticisms however. First off, a couple of typos, "dwelling in the deep..forsaking the shallow" ad here as im the antipenultimate ...

O.k. so there is a sequel. :-) That's good. I was slightly afraid this would just be a filler segment, just because a segment is needed but isn't actually much ...