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Hey ! You know the starting of your poem is really really cute and sweet bit you lost the hold after " Then I grew into a kid " Okey ...

Hey ! Yes you predicted right it's a long n lengthy piem though but your anger and depression is shown clear. Why??? I agree to niteowl what he wrote that.. ...

Amazing! This is the word I can use for your poem. Its is the mirror actually of words. Situations which we can relate to in real.nothing to criticise but many ...

Hey ! Its 4eally lovely and nice poem . Only mistake what I found is "i" . May be you've written it and just submitted without checking. So couldn't rechecked ...

Hey girl ! Very nice and heart touching short story it is. Perfect characters and words are used nicely to show the emotions. Your story is like ..one can relate ...

Sarcasm ! Isn't it? May be or may be not but yeah I agree with you . Forsome people love is game and for some it's life. For some its ...

Hey dear ! I like the way you Penn downsnd the rhyming style. Thoigh a little sad but words are nicely carved. Esrlier it often happens with me that I ...

hey Emily ! Why you sound so depressing. Every individual has his or her own persona .doesn't matter what others think or see about our outlook but what matters is ...

Hey girl ! I also love reading books . People normally call me a bookworm hehe as It's always in my hand. So be proud of that I have a ...

Very true some mysteries are really never supposed to be solved. And they will be in our mind forever as an unsolved puzzle. Sometimes we think that we areabout toreach ...

Hey ! So sweet feelings of being in friendship. It remindedbme of my childhood n youth. Those were the days. Especially your these words. " Days where I can't feel ...

Taha ! dear don't think ever that your work is weird because whatever we think we write is your emotional feelings which we Penn . I don't find anything which ...

Awesomely written. Fantabulous thoughts. Amazing penning. I am reading it and feltbtonread it again n again n again. Marvellous carving through words of feelings. And the deep meaning hidden in ...

Hey Katie ! Sometimes we don't get proper words to describe what we really felt after reading something. It's not because we are speechless or lack of words or unable ...

Hey Haven ! I am confused if its a short story or a poem ! Though it was nicely pennedand emotions are carved pretty good. I5w a common thing that ...