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  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: Patch and Petals

    Hey dear! Firstly I love the names of your rabbits. So cute . And a lovely short story. Though its raw and unrhymed but I like it. The way you ...

    Mar 24, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Words Fail Me

    Hey thete ! I am here to review though I myself is not so good but still I want to. Okey starting from the first line which doesn't seem so ...

    Mar 24, 2016
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: The words that flow

    Hey Bookoholic ! Nice name btw ;-) . So review hmm okey ! Honestly saying I like your penning. You write far far better than I can and the most ...

    Mar 23, 2016
  • Short Story » Satire, Humor Re: Chocoholics Anonymous

    Ummmm Chocolate uhhh not my type. But what you penned is definitely like ..how to resist.. though good message through humour perspective and I lov3d the way you penned.CHOCOHOLIC I ...

    Mar 23, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Opposites

    Woooooooooowwwwwwww amazingly carved ! So mich depth and so truly penned. You are a nice poet who know how to touch straight to heart and brain. And yes it's so ...

    Mar 23, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Other Re: The Smelling of Roses

    Hey dear ! Except the Grammer part I didn't find anything is lacking . Infact a very straightforward poem and beautifully carved. The wotds are seeming that comes directly grom ...

    Mar 23, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: it's kind of funny, really

    So I am reviewing your poem. Firstly I want to say that be clear in what you are writing. You should be clear and specific as it's more like a ...

    Mar 23, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Unbroken

    Hey dear ! What an inspiring poem it is. You make me feel confidanye and especially your words... " yet I remain Unbroken I'll remain Unbroken" Not getting wotds to ...

    Mar 23, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Untitled (Official)

    Nicely carved emotions . Its not only simple poeyry but penning down of feelings experienced by some individual. If you are the one then you ate strong enough and if ...

    Mar 23, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Random Poem

    Hey ! Cute, little, sweet AMD beautiful poem it is. Nice rjyming of stanzas but only thing sounds not so fit is repeatitin of "I could give you" but may ...

    Mar 23, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Found You

    Applause . Though its a review but I really like your penning. Amazingly beautiful words are carved to bring out emotions from the reader too. In the beginning to the ...

    Mar 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: My Book

    Nice piece of writing by you but the only thing which is not suiting it is repetition of sentence "I open my book " Rathet you can write it only ...

    Mar 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: Your problems are fake; destroy yourself.

    Hey ! Though I myself is not so good as to critic but I want to say few things after reviewing. Your poem is not in a rhyming flow but ...

    Mar 22, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: Poetry is dead

    Sorry to say but please don't use such words as for some people its a worship. I love to read and write poetry and I respect it. If you have ...

    Mar 22, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I loved you but you left anyways

    Hey ! I have also written similar emotions . Only difference is of words I choose. "Love is kind to some Love is harsh to some No one but Love ...

    Mar 22, 2016


i enjoy repeating things twice in poetry. but only ever twice. nothing tragic ever happens thrice if i have control of it
— theromanticchemist