my cheeks are stained
with tears—
tears of solitude—
but i can sense the
coming of dawn,
beckoning me to the
skies.
Hope's waiting for me
on the other side—
that is why i'll fly.
despite losing my
way,
every time I look
for you,
my hands sense the
thoughts
you
left behind—
i'll grab hold of
you and never let go.
two
hearts seeking each other—
That's what dreams are
made of!
Supporting one another
draws us closer
Every time.
We don't need to live
lives of sorrow anymore.
There's joy in
supporting one another
As you live.
I'm sure the two of us
Will come to realize
that.
Despite Losing My Way,
I Found You.
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Hey NicolMemo!!
Here I am ready, to review another work of yours!!
This one is again fascinating!! I loved it. You have got a beautiful style of writing. I admire tis styl of writing. It is influensive. I am stunned when I am reading this poem. This is a real specimen of romantic touch. I e-specially loved the last line:
"Despite Losing My Way,
I Found You."
The title is very apt and related with this particular line. I liked the teme.
The very first stanza is emotional, and heart touching. I like your idea of the dreams. I like this poem.
You have done really great!!
Keep writing!
Applause . Though its a review but I really like your penning. Amazingly beautiful words are carved to bring out emotions from the reader too. In the beginning to the end ...how sadness turned into hope and positivity.... lovely piece of work. You lines
" Hope is waiting for me "
Are awrsome words and a perfect complete sentence . Hope to read more poems written so nicely from you. Stay blessed!
I am going to review your work today.
Let me start off saying this is a really lovely poem and that it puts a smile on my face at the end. The beginning sounded like you were depressed cause you lost your lover and you were trying to find them.
I would love to see more of your work in the future so keep up the good work.
I loved this poem cause I am depressed and it made me think of my girlfriend who is in another state.
Well anyways, thanks for letting me review your work today.