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Wow. That was deep (I think) I had to read it twice to understand what you were talking about but like I said wow. I love this part: Through my ...

Hmm, this has the potential to be good, but at the moment, well, not so great. Try putting the poem into stanzas or something because the spacing is a bit ...

Good sonnet, I recently started doing them at school and I realised they are not easy at all. One small thing though, on the second line do you mean mind ...

I like the words, the flow and the repetition. The poem sounded as if the person who was speaking was angry. Was that what you meant? Cool, sad, poem. I ...

Loved the first bit, couldn't stop reading it. You have a talent for writing and I am so jealopus! (Joke) All the stuff you write is so good, or maybe ...

It was so beautiful! I love the imagery throughout the poem. The start was wonderful and so was the middle and end! Oh! I want this poem!!!!!!! There was punctuation ...

Its sort of funny, but a bit random and I don't entirely get what you have to say. But good for little kids if the like black bugs called adder. ...

I love this poem! in fact i'd like to print it of but don't worry i wont I love the language, the description, escpeciall the bit, You were vivacious, exuberant, ...

Hi luke yes i know who you are Please change your age as we all know you are not 99 By the way this is Charlotte your weird friend Conor's ...

Well, its good. I like rhmying and pace of the poem but there are a few error. As I Run This Blade Threw My Flesh Shouldn't it be through my ...

I think this poem is quite good although it needs more information and description. who is telling the story, where are they going, what is the star expressway? The best ...

Cool Cool Cool Cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Love this poem!!!! What are you writing a book about? I always start novels but nver finish them. Bets bit in this poem was "A weapon, ...

Give piepiemann22 a break guys! This is quite a cool poem, well i think it is anyway And there is a point to it, I think you are saying that ...

I laughed my head off reading that! Well not literally cos' how would I be able to write this... Anyway! great characterisation good plot and nice language I suppose you ...

I like the poem its rather sad and frustrating but its good I wish i could right like that my poem ( demons ) Is a bit rubbish. Meaningless gestures, ...