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  • Short Story » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Stand up!

    Hey! I'm Sarah! XD This is really different from what I normally read. Actually, this isn't something I read at all. However, it's really powerful. For a short story thing ...

    Nov 10, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Historical Fiction Re: When the Paper Comes (a Ryanna flash)

    Hey there! I'm Sarah and I'm here to review! May I just say this is a really nice, sweet story! I love the idea of this, it's so innocent and ...

    Nov 10, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: The first job

    Alrighty! The name's Sarah and I'm here to review! :) I love these types of stories! So full of awesomeness and power! I love the idea with this, it's just ...

    Nov 1, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Diamonds In the Mist Intro

    Hello! I'm Sarah and I'm here to review! I love the description in this! It was absolutely amazing how you described things! I particularly like this line: "The massive castle ...

    Nov 1, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Stay Away From the House

    Hey, I'm Sarah and I'm here to review! Now, this is an interesting read. I like the way it was written, it seems like someone is reading to me and ...

    Oct 30, 2013
  • Other » Teen Fiction, Other Re: Reed and Felix

    Hello! I'm here to review your work! I like this a lot, it's very different from everything else I have read on this site. It's really straight forward and I ...

    Oct 13, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Other Side of Depression

    Hey! I'm here to reveiw! Very emotional peice! I loved it in every way. The voice is as if it's talking to me like a conversation! It's also depressing to ...

    Oct 13, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Culture Re: A rift in reality~Teaser

    Hey! I'm Sarah and I'm here to reveiw! First, this is a very intereting idea. I like how you made the story linked with the globe and the main character ...

    Oct 13, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Satire Re: The Veda of Pablo- Book 1- Fathers

    Hey hey! First, I welcome you here with open arms! \(^O^)/ Okay, this reminds me of something I have read before. It was when I was extremely little and someone ...

    Oct 1, 2013
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: The Unit

    Hello! Alright, another depressing story, (jokes). But seriously, this will move a person to tears. Not me of course, but it managed to pull a few heart strings. The voice ...

    Oct 1, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Horror Re: story thang part 2

    Hey! Well then, everyone is posting creepy things at late at night for me now...GEH! XD Still, I like this a lot. It's so freaky it's not funny. Especially the ...

    Sep 23, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Rings of Rhea - Part 1.7

    Hello! \(^O^)/ I have no idea what is going on in this novel of yours but what I'm seeing here...I like it. It seems to be very strong in the ...

    Sep 23, 2013
  • Script » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Shades: Episode One, Act One "Super Freaks"

    Hey! Yeah! I love reading scripts! It's my type of thing, really. I like the format of it and whatnot. This was really good! Maryanne is one cool person, like ...

    Sep 23, 2013
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: Saints.

    Hi! Whoa, that was...Ugh..A pleasant image at 9pm in the night. But seriously, what a chilling story! Damn, descriptions in this are really disturbingly brilliant that it may be better ...

    Sep 23, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: Endless: Part V

    Hey there! The name is Sarah and I'm here to review your work! Well, I must say, great suspense with all the characters and the plot! I always like stories ...

    Sep 23, 2013


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