Sujana

Hello, Lorelie (such a pretty name)! Since you had the kind courtesy to review one of my long, mind boggling books (a miracle in and of itself) I thought it ...

Firstly, the One Problem I Had That May or May Not Matter: -"There. is. no. why." No why? No reason why, you mean? Actual Honest to God Review: I liked ...

Good evening, Mr/Ms. Sunset. I'll be reviewing this quaint little poem today, if you wouldn't mind. Let's start with the minor issues I had with this poem: -"and I can ...

I should let you know here and now, even if I love reading poetry, I suck at reviewing poetry. But since you asked... -"Some words are too deeper for my ...

Some Mistakes Before I Begin: -"His brother was Emperor Chin Ju." I felt like names like Ao Tian and Chin Ju deserved a hyphen in between (ie Ao-Tian and Chin-Ju), ...

Hello, Horus. It's Ellstar, here for a review. Gender-busting is always an intriguing topic to talk about. I've always felt like, while the girls definitely deserve to complain about the ...

Hello, Herbgirl. You have a worthwhile little poem-thing going on here, though what you're going to do with it one day I can't say for sure. I can, however, review ...

This can only lead to strange paths, and I've always loved the strange and beautiful. Firstly, before I do a full on content review, the smaller issues: -""oh my goodness! ...

Certainly an intriguing story, and definitely one that has a lot of good things going for it. Honestly, I'm not sure what you were looking to do with it though--its ...

An interesting poem. I think everything is interesting, though, so my initial comments are useless to you. You said yes to my request to review this, and thus I shall--but ...

As I am obliged to watch over short stories about angels and demons (and doing a bad job at it as there's still one more work I need to help ...

Some Brief Mistakes: -"Your parents would have not wanted this." I feel like this is awkward phrasing--'Would not have' would be better. Not that it's wrong, it's just awkward and ...

I once said that I would one day wish that I would find a work on here that I couldn't review because it was too good. Either I'm getting much ...

Wow. WOW. THAT WAS SO HELPFUL THANK YOU OH MY GOD *shares with millions of other friends* okay, but seriously, this was actually pretty funny. Going to shortly review it ...

How...strangely poetic. I think that's the only proper way I can describe this story--it's a poet trying to translate their thoughts into a short story, and strangely having it work ...