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Re: Nothing
Leaving a like on this because, while I find this a bit flawed, the concept itself is absolutely flawless. I will call most ideas intriguing, because the very nature of ...
Apr 18, 2016 -
Re: Chicago Chapter Two
Hello there, Rascal! I saw that you posted the second chapter of your book, the one I read a month ago, and I'm pleased. I'll be reviewing this for a ...
Apr 17, 2016 -
Re: Cafuné
Hey there, Joel, its me again. You know who I am because I've at the very least reviewed two of your works now, three or so if we include this ...
Apr 17, 2016 -
Re: Safety: Prologue and Chapter 1
Oh, Ester. Oh, Ester, no. I'm sorry, I have no idea what else to say to that ending. Never have I seen childhood longing for adventure associated with such horrors. ...
Apr 17, 2016 -
Re: Delayed
An interesting story. I liked how it sounded like an annoyed human being during customs in the airport, but instead it's with aliens trying to get back home. Not sure ...
Apr 16, 2016 -
Re: (1) The Sorrows of Young Writer May 15
A...strangely beautiful piece. I couldn't help but imagine the protagonist surrounded in a fog of smoke, purple and pink neon lights painting his expression, shadows of dancing women and cheering ...
Apr 16, 2016 -
Re: Under A Moonlit Tree
Oh my. Oh my . The work wasn't exactly clear about it, but I'm at least somewhat sure that the protagonist tried to commit suicide under a moonlit tree. Was ...
Apr 16, 2016 -
Re: Carnelian Part One
God, you talk about hair more than I talk about God in an insulting manner. And that's really something to say, because I talk about God a lot . But ...
Apr 16, 2016 -
Re: 7. Thoughts
*clears throat* *puts on pink scarf* *puts on yoga pants* *buys a fresh new set of pink heart sunglasses* DRAMMMMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! Okay, that was one hell of an introduction. Now, you ...
Apr 16, 2016 -
Re: The next delay
An interesting lyrical short story--really, I've never heard such a combination, but for the most part it works here. There are still some shortcomings, of course, but that's for the ...
Apr 16, 2016 -
Re: Just a Trim
I suddenly have the urge to cut off all my hair. Is that normal? I think that's normal. I need a shave. Just one highlight for today: -"Hyacinth shivered as ...
Apr 16, 2016 -
Re: It's You
Hello, Klennon. It's Ellstar, here for a short review, seeing this is also a short poem. I find your poem a little bit interesting, but overall it somewhat blends in ...
Apr 16, 2016 -
Re: Smokers die younger!!
An interesting look on cigarettes and smoking in general. I'll be honest, this is a very cliched subject to talk about, and very few essayists will approach it without coming ...
Apr 16, 2016 -
Re: How the Devil Fell for a Common-day Saint
Haha, that was pretty good. I mean, not great or anything, but it was enjoyable, and in novels like these the winning points go to the ones I can laugh ...
Apr 16, 2016 -
Re: Daisies: Prologue
Hello, dearest. Ellstar here, to give a little bit of a review for you. May I just start out by saying that this is a strange way to start what ...
Apr 16, 2016
