StoryWeaver13

You know, while there are books out there about 14-year-olds, I do agree that after the coming-of-age years they just don't have a lot of that same sort of trend, ...

Okay, so this was good. It felt a little rushed, but it was still a solid start. I'm pretty sure another reviewer already pointed out the fact that the information ...

This was actually pretty good. There was a really natural feel that can be hard to capture in poetry sometimes, and I liked the simple concept. Well, I can't think ...

Actually, I thought this was really cool! I read an article by someone (can't remember who), and it was an old piece. The guy had originally just written these sort ...

My life itself has become a chore, In which I'm forced to abandon hope And hang my soul up at the door. Honestly, the first impression I get is a ...

This was cute, if nothing else. It just felt...happy? It was just sort of confused but curious, and that was interesting to me. The only thing's that I think it ...

Okay, so I'm going to agree with Elinor Brynn a lot here. This poem was definitely not bad, but that doesn't mean that it can't be improved. The problem was ...

I know the length will terrify plenty of reviewers from this piece, but it's so well-written. And you know what? Don't shorten it. If we all wrote for the sake ...

I definitely think this needs to be expanded on. Really we just don't even get a complete sense of what you're trying to say, but your lines and use of ...

Abigail narrowed her sapphire eyes, trying to see if the room ever ended. Shadows danced in the corners of the chamber, rearing and rising to the high ceiling, twirling and ...

This was an interesting idea, and this was written pretty well, but like the first reviewer pointed out it lacked rhythm or structure. Even though it's free-verse, there needs to ...

“Cut!” yelled the director. My heart dropped and I screamed inside. What was I doing wrong this time? “Chelsea, you need to act surprised when they all come to you. ...

This isn't really my style, but it was pretty well-written. I think it could be "tweaked" a little bit here and there, just cleaned up overall and given some commas ...

This was okay, but really I think that it needed more. It was just kind of typical. Your main problem is cliche words (yep, believe it or not, even certain ...

I thought this was really good, and I can definitely relate. I'm a gymnast, a sport infamous for its annorexics, but I love your view on it being "selfish" to ...