StoryWeaver13

Hey there birdsfly! Here to review. :] Well, I'm rather picky when it comes to rhyming poems. They are either done perfectly, or they are not, and the latter group ...

This is really quite cool, isn't it? I don't know why you have elected to start every line with S, but it's pretty interesting aesthetically, and it doesn't seem to ...

Hey shloka! Here to review. :] And I'm must say that I'm certainly glad that I am doing so. This poem was great. It's simple and straightforward, but it's a ...

I like this...it's a really interesting topic that I'd never heard of, and definitely one I'd support. I think that this was well-organized and packed a lot of information into ...

Hey, Puckerman! Well, as usual, I like your style. It feels steady and meticulous, but simultaneously natural. No need for flashy words or big ideas...you can get by on your ...

This was really almost had a "Twilight Zone" kind of aura about it. Which, in my opinion, is a very, very good thing. This was written very mellifluously; the words ...

Cool indeed. I like the idea behind this - it's a compelling opening that could head in a million directions. I want to know more! That being said, I would ...

This isn't typically my kind of poem, but you wrote it so well that it didn't bother me at all. Actually, I quite like it. After scratching my head and ...

Hey there, Shnerd, and merry Christmas/Kwanza/Hannukah/New Year! Anyway, I'm a picky poem person (especially when it rhymes), so prepare for a critical review. The first two lines are a bit ...

Well, I find this a little typical and cliche. The problem I have with it is that the characters really aren't developed in a way that makes them unique or ...

This is very well-written. I've been torn apart by this story, and even more so by the Westboro Baptist Church's cold-hearted response to the tragedy. Your poem was lovely; it ...

This was simple, but as usual completely on-point and well-written. I was actually really intrigued by the title; it just sounds...I don't know...good, in that simple feely kind of way. ...

This felt somewhat disjointed to me. I think it's the lack of punctuation, along with the way in which the sentences are written and divided. Conceptually, I think this lacked ...

Love it. The ending was, of course, spectacular. Brilliantly blunt. Nothing else needs to be said of it. The beginning was equally dry and acerbic. Some places in between, however, ...

Hey, here to review! :D "Sometimes he walks alone, Right by my room, unaware of his surroundings. Is music playing to[[o]] loudly in his mind? Are his thoughts racing to[[o]] ...